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Published: 2015-07-11 15:53:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 749; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 12
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Description Practicing backgrounds and effects. Crap, I'm bad at this.
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Comments: 5

Draakor [2015-07-12 01:26:14 +0000 UTC]

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You have a good sense of depth, and I like the dust effect of the breaking rocks. One thing to note, though, is the fact that it looks kind of static and unmoving. There needs to be more signification of motion, like a blur where each rock piece was in the split second before this, or some motion lines indicating the direction and speed of each moving thing. Overall, a good balance of color, shade, texture, and depth, but the motion needs just a little bit more work. Great job! I look forward to more artwork from you in the future.

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SeventhDeven In reply to Draakor [2015-07-12 03:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I would recommend motion blurring the rocks just a tad.  I don't think it's necessary, but it would enhance the image and make it look more like a professional artist made it.

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GrifMcGruf [2015-07-15 00:07:52 +0000 UTC]

"Bad at this" ???

You're blowing me away.

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BlueHeadPhones [2015-07-11 17:10:33 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, I'm not a pro but I like the effects on it. The colours are fine too, matches the scene. Keep it up~ 

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Abralov [2015-07-11 16:48:43 +0000 UTC]

wow nice bro

I would write a critic but I gotta go 

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