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Epitaph of Leonard P. Matlovich (1988)-Edited-
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the one kinda throws things off. it took me a minute to figure out what you were trying to say. maybe you should move the one to the end and kind of moce the two men part down toward the end of the sentence. to mee it kind of just looks like they were thrown in there and have no relation to the phrase. sorry if it sounds mean im just trying to help ><
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I keep looking at it and trying to figure out what could be changed. And I can always use help! n.n
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Well, I edited it and hopefully it looks better. I didn't like the green clashing with the pink, either.
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im sure it will look fine
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