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Published: 2006-08-18 07:59:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description I hurried down the creaky stairs, dripping with rain and clutching a heavy black case.  Glancing through window after dirty window I silently stumbled along the familiar path before finding what I was looking for.
A warm yellow light emerged from the room, and a blast of noise reached my ears.
“You’re late!” Anna’s face appeared in front of me. Dark eyeliner and slightly crooked teeth, a spindly silver dragon was suspended from her right ear.  
Quickly, I discarded my drenched clothes, whilst apologising to the rest of the group.

“You look slightly…” Jono paused, “wet” he teased.
Tall and skinny, he was wearing faded jeans and a tattered navy polyprop with several rips at the elbow.  His golden curls were slightly wilder than normal, and his sunken blue eyes smiled out at me, laughing at my deranged sodden hair and flushed cheeks.  Next to him a tall white coffin stood proudly. On the inside I knew that it was lined with rich luxurious red velvet, waiting to be reunited once again with the slender dark body which rested in Jono’s hands.  Rosining his bow, he sat down and started to tune.
Tonight we were rehearsing Shostakovich.
My favourite.

It started quietly- just the viola and cello- rumbling softly on the C string.  On my right, Jiwon entered.  Her sweet face relaxed into a frown as the heart wrenching melody became faster and faster.  Her fingers raced up and down the slender neck of the violin in a race with the now jagged spiccato bowing.  I barged in, disturbing the other three with a flourish of angry chords, clashing in a fusion of colour.  In vain, my distraught chords fought with the heavy drone of the cello. If you can’t beat 'em, join 'em.  My chords became less aggressive, and we became slower and sleepier, as if wading through a river of mud.  Out of the mist a bird fluttered.  I answered to Jiwon’s call, shrill and sweet.  Up and up we went, flying higher and higher, always reaching for that top B flat…
I shrieked.
Jiwon laughed.
Anna’s face screwed up in disgust.
“That was terrible! Bar 109, just me and Ji” I laughed.
Slowly we retraced our steps, one note at a time, moving only to the next when we both felt it was in tune.

Anna and Jono waited patiently, this was, after all what we came here for. It was important that we used our time to get it right.
Jiwon and I played it over and over again, those same eight bars, faster and faster each time before bringing Anna and Jono back in.
After an hour and a half we left our instruments and wandered upstairs.  In the staff room we found a tin of Milo and half a packet of instant coffee.  Waiting for the jug to boil I watched my friends as they laughed and chattered, oblivious to the steady patter of rain on the dark windows.  Jiwon perched on the table, huddled up in a polarfleece ten times too big for her tiny frame.  Anna’s black skinny leg jeans sprawled out from under a heavy black coat, as she took a whole couch for herself.  Multiple studs and rings gleamed in the light from her ears and nose.  

Jono noticed me watching, and beckoned me over with puppy-dog eyes.  I poked my tongue out at him and brought the coffee over, slumping onto the couch next to him.  He took a sip. Strong, just the way he liked it.  We all survived on coffee, and would never lose the bags from under our strained, heavy eyes.  It was tough being a musician and we all knew it would only get harder.
I snuggled into Jono, his warm arm around me.  It all paid off in the end.
Jiwon hurried us all downstairs.  It was going to be a long night.
If music be the food of love, play on.
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Comments: 8

keldamo [2006-08-28 06:08:35 +0000 UTC]

aww aaron is sweet. did you meet simon? hahah he's a crack up... they're all so egocentric. including laurence. i love it

yay congrats for the bronze!! [better colour than gold ]
do you want me to order a nyo cd for you? cos they're only like 20 bucks.. for a double cd.

heh.. jono. aw he's so gorgeous. plays the cello [obviously] and.. um. he's 1st year at otago, doing a music paper and health science or something. He's been promoted to 2nd desk of cellos this year, which means that i have a perfect view of him. again lol. [i liked him last year too >.> ]

dunedin people are mad. hahah.. more on blog. soonish. when i can be bothered.urgh. have fun!

miss ya too! xoxo

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cza24-9 [2006-08-18 23:22:07 +0000 UTC]

my gawsh girl! why don't you write more! this is so awesome.
shostakovich! i love him lol
man...i want to meet these people, the way you show them is one of complete harmony and a shared passion of music.
Next to him a tall white coffin stood proudly. On the inside I knew that it was lined with rich luxurious red velvet, waiting to be reunited once again with the slender dark body which rested in Jono’s hands.

I think the only thing in a couple of places, like he sat down and started to tune., is that you could show not tell, like, dont be so blatant about what he did. But then again, it seems to work for this piece, because i think too much show and not enough tell makes a piece to rugged. It flows smoothly and wow... this is so a

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keldamo In reply to cza24-9 [2006-08-19 20:24:48 +0000 UTC]

hahaha woahhh!!

sheesh.. you scare me.. yeah, after what everyone's said about this i think i will start to write..

maybe.

thankuuu!

i made up the shostakovich piece
and all the people are from nyo

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cza24-9 In reply to keldamo [2006-08-21 08:22:07 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah i figured...we should so play one of the shostakovich quartets sometime...no 8 is awesome *swoons*

anyways...yes! you should write more! i command it! heh ^_^

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keldamo In reply to cza24-9 [2006-08-21 09:55:40 +0000 UTC]

i don't know any of his chamber music!

nyo are playing shostakovich 10 tho =/

aye aye miss!!
[laurence and alex are soooo cute. i love laurence. and alex. *sigh*]

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cza24-9 In reply to keldamo [2006-08-27 05:39:36 +0000 UTC]

i know you lucky lucky lucky person!! im listening to it now

omg! laurence is sososo sweet!! i told him id heard about a couple of parties...and hes like...'the afterball...and...and...the one the weekend after *cheesy grin* and alex... :-p ' lol. he's so faithful its sweet.

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keldamo In reply to cza24-9 [2006-08-27 06:34:54 +0000 UTC]

hahah i know!!! aww yay you met him! isn't he great? i love laurence.

and they won gold!!
how'd you guys do??>???? tell all! john says hey back!

and i talked to jono heaps.

OMG IT'S ALL SO EXCITING HASIODHASCFNHIOSEVG JVHERYNMW FR

i'm off to a masterclass..
tell tell! xoxo

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cza24-9 In reply to keldamo [2006-08-27 06:48:41 +0000 UTC]

ja...we got a bronze. which was expected lol. i know you do lol laurence is AWESOME! and aaron...hes pretty cool too. and a major flirt lol. ooh! jono eh...heh ^_^ giz the goss lol
of course it is!!!! if there's a cd of you guys concert i want one! k!!!
have fun!
aw yay! i miss john... but yay for hi-ness...
love ya!! miss you heaps xoxo

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