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JARM13 [2011-10-14 23:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Honestly I find the whole idea silly ,but you really wrote a great story . It makes the crazy idea seem real . Very good job . I hope those that enjoy the expansion stories read this , I bet they enjoy it even more then I do .
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KeldorFeign In reply to JARM13 [2011-10-15 06:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the comment, I am glad you liked it, and even more, I am glad for the feedback. I have a part two up if you want to look at it.
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heliumgirl77 [2010-11-21 08:48:36 +0000 UTC]
This is actually quite good, and I'm glad you posted it! There's a lovely build-up, and the feelings are handled delicately and with just the right amount of trepidation and excitement. Please stay involved here!
The floating is a real bonus... (helium milk, mmm?) and makes me wonder what would happen if one of her friends tried to rescue her.....and got splashed rather badly....oooh....I will have to write another story in this line....
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KeldorFeign In reply to heliumgirl77 [2010-11-21 17:05:57 +0000 UTC]
Please do, I always look forward to your writings.
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