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InksmithDesignStudio [2011-09-26 12:49:36 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I live in a beach town and there a girls selling these downtown on the boardwalk during the summer at the storefronts. They stand there and shoot bubbles at people that walk by and yell "Bubblegun!" over and over again. I can't help but smile every time I see one.

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taiga23 [2011-03-29 20:00:36 +0000 UTC]

excellent, superb framing

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DarrenClarke [2010-09-06 05:42:04 +0000 UTC]

sorry no constructive criticism from me..
its just a brilliant shot

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Glasperlenspielerin [2010-08-08 20:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Hi, this is Lydia from

We've featured this photo as an example of the topic for our next Mini-Contest: [link]
Hope that's okay for you and maybe you'd like to consider participating

Thanks
Lydia

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Hoshi-Fumiko [2010-08-02 13:31:58 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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CalixLove [2010-07-30 20:37:44 +0000 UTC]

I think that if the light was coming from straight on, the picture might seem a tad more even.

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kissadam [2010-07-30 11:08:33 +0000 UTC]

coool!

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kelemenis In reply to kissadam [2010-07-30 13:22:00 +0000 UTC]

thankx

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kobem [2010-07-25 19:49:16 +0000 UTC]

so much bracelets. What is she supposed to do with these lots of bracelets?

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CarolineCherry [2010-05-24 05:13:46 +0000 UTC]

I must say I like it. But as you asked for constructive criticism...

I would suggest having a ligt of some kind on her right side, as the shadows are just too black that they are a little distracting. personally, I would also position the model somewhere other than in the centre of the frame, a bit of negative space would add a whole lot more "action" to the shot. Also, maybe getting a little more of her face in the shot would work. I know you've got it so she's aiming the "gun" at the viewer but I would like to see more of her expression.

but as I said, I do like it. I think it's an awesome concept and you've done it pretty darn well.

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camilah [2010-05-20 17:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool,bubbles

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kelemenis In reply to camilah [2010-05-22 13:52:42 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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camilah In reply to kelemenis [2010-05-22 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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princevlad39 [2010-05-20 13:51:53 +0000 UTC]

I like that you waited for the bubbles to move enough to show her eye. The only bad thing I have to say about it is the angle of the light, or the way she was standing, causes her breasts to look uneven. Overall a great idea and a fun picture.

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guyprives [2010-05-19 23:15:30 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!!!

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kelemenis [2010-05-19 15:10:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Whazizname [2010-05-19 06:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Great colors; I love how they match the rainbows in the bubbles!!!


This image might fit in well at

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poulopoulos [2010-05-18 20:01:02 +0000 UTC]

funny and nice
alli fasi.

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HansRichardPedersen [2010-05-18 19:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Make bubbels not war!!!
A really funny picture.

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kelemenis In reply to HansRichardPedersen [2010-05-18 19:20:49 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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JPS-Bassist [2010-05-18 18:39:20 +0000 UTC]

ah... if only all battlefields could look like this one.

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kelemenis In reply to JPS-Bassist [2010-05-18 19:21:23 +0000 UTC]


thanx

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