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Ahem, alright.
So in another night of restless sleep, I started thinking and junk...and of course, it landed into Kory's domain...
I originally made him to be a guy who after a big fight with a "monster" ends up as a experiment for the 6r1m formula (aka Grimdark)
and he ends up as a "super soldier"...but after thinking more on it...it doesn't work.

I don't know if I mentioned it but Grimdark (6r1m formula) is a black liquid substance that can enter people and turn them into literal monsters
through body horror transformation (very painful, very insanity inducing) <- Insert Elder Gods creation stuff
HOWEVER depending on how much is in the body it can either be slow or very fast in the transformation.
Everyone has a little Grimdark in them, not enough to do it's TF effect, but enough to induce paranoia, depression, short tempers, etc.
Sorta normal behavior in some...BUT if more is introduced...the effects get worse: hallucinations, extreme hysteria, insanity, etc.
and if let unchecked it can lead to the actual transformation into a zombie-esque being that spreads it OR if REALLY bad enough...a transformation into a Grimlord: a very monstrous and disturbing creature.

Another thing about the Grimdark, it is able to almost heal it's victims body instantanously, albeit extremely painful...hence another insanity inducing effect.

Back on track!
Now realizing that Kory couldn't just receive the "injection" of the 6r1m formula and stay sane n' stuff...
I started remembering stuff from various shows and games...
Now, Grimdark affects the brain of course...which leads to the effects...I already have one character (technically 3 now) who is "immune" to the effects of Grimdark: Jonn Hywell.

Jonn's immune to the effects because of one major plot point in my story for him...and I don't know if I wanna give spoilers for it and- AGH FUCK IT!
I'm probably never gonna make the comic and junk so I'm gonna spoil it! Jonn is part Psion. Half.
Now because he's Half Psion, it means he's got a bit of anatomical difference to a normal person: His brain is built differently and has immunity to illusions, mind control and various mental conditions...
that and he's a budding Psychokinesis user (he not good yet)

BACK ON TRACK!
Now Kory can't be injected cause it would affect his brain no matter what...of course...it wouldn't affect a cybernetically-altered brain...(just like Cyborg in Lego Justice League w/ Martian Manhunter)
SO! I began rebuilding his story... He's still injured in a fight with a "Monster" but is MUCH MUCH MUCH worse off after the fight (literally sliced in half...waist wise) and ends up a experiment for a procedure to
create a "Super Soldier" (cliche, I know, BUT I LIKE IT) and ends up with multiple cybernetic limbs and an experimental "pump" for the 6r1m formula, which is used to "heal" his body constantly by pumping it through his veins (hence the black veins).

Of course, the "Doctor" of the Labs is a bit of an ecentric and has added a few choice ideas of her own...such as the "sharpened teeth", 'cause she thought they looked cool...and the "Ninja Toes!" as she exclaims...another bright idea.
apart from that it's mostly enhanced strength, endurance and the typical super soldier specs, no integrated weapons ('cept some brass knuckle studs in knuckles. another of the Doctors ideas)
and an enhanced cybernetic brain with visual augments...

The design I came up with came with the phrase in mind: "What if I mixed Adam Jenson (Deus Ex) with Stroggification (Quake 4)" and the result?

Kory's Cybernetic Parts.

Sorry for the long description but when I get started it's VERY hard to shorten it all
I JUST GOTTA EXPLAIN IT IN DETAIL! This is the major problem with me when I get ideas and stuff, I keep going ang going and it's hard to stop T_T
I can't get any SLEEP! my brain is just constantly on OVERDRIVE! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!!!

Also! don't mind the stain (i think) and the random Jonn drawing!
Fun Fact: all drawn with a WOODEN PENCIL! TAKE THAT YOU YOUNGSTERS!

-Kelrick

Description
Ahem, alright.
So in another night of restless sleep, I started thinking and junk...and of course, it landed into Kory's domain...
I originally made him to be a guy who after a big fight with a "monster" ends up as a experiment for the 6r1m formula (aka Grimdark)
and he ends up as a "super soldier"...but after thinking more on it...it doesn't work.

I don't know if I mentioned it but Grimdark (6r1m formula) is a black liquid substance that can enter people and turn them into literal monsters
through body horror transformation (very painful, very insanity inducing) <- Insert Elder Gods creation stuff
HOWEVER depending on how much is in the body it can either be slow or very fast in the transformation.
Everyone has a little Grimdark in them, not enough to do it's TF effect, but enough to induce paranoia, depression, short tempers, etc.
Sorta normal behavior in some...BUT if more is introduced...the effects get worse: hallucinations, extreme hysteria, insanity, etc.
and if let unchecked it can lead to the actual transformation into a zombie-esque being that spreads it OR if REALLY bad enough...a transformation into a Grimlord: a very monstrous and disturbing creature.

Another thing about the Grimdark, it is able to almost heal it's victims body instantanously, albeit extremely painful...hence another insanity inducing effect.

Back on track!
Now realizing that Kory couldn't just receive the "injection" of the 6r1m formula and stay sane n' stuff...
I started remembering stuff from various shows and games...
Now, Grimdark affects the brain of course...which leads to the effects...I already have one character (technically 3 now) who is "immune" to the effects of Grimdark: Jonn Hywell.

Jonn's immune to the effects because of one major plot point in my story for him...and I don't know if I wanna give spoilers for it and- AGH FUCK IT!
I'm probably never gonna make the comic and junk so I'm gonna spoil it! Jonn is part Psion. Half.
Now because he's Half Psion, it means he's got a bit of anatomical difference to a normal person: His brain is built differently and has immunity to illusions, mind control and various mental conditions...
that and he's a budding Psychokinesis user (he not good yet)

BACK ON TRACK!
Now Kory can't be injected cause it would affect his brain no matter what...of course...it wouldn't affect a cybernetically-altered brain...(just like Cyborg in Lego Justice League w/ Martian Manhunter)
SO! I began rebuilding his story... He's still injured in a fight with a "Monster" but is MUCH MUCH MUCH worse off after the fight (literally sliced in half...waist wise) and ends up a experiment for a procedure to
create a "Super Soldier" (cliche, I know, BUT I LIKE IT) and ends up with multiple cybernetic limbs and an experimental "pump" for the 6r1m formula, which is used to "heal" his body constantly by pumping it through his veins (hence the black veins).

Of course, the "Doctor" of the Labs is a bit of an ecentric and has added a few choice ideas of her own...such as the "sharpened teeth", 'cause she thought they looked cool...and the "Ninja Toes!" as she exclaims...another bright idea.
apart from that it's mostly enhanced strength, endurance and the typical super soldier specs, no integrated weapons ('cept some brass knuckle studs in knuckles. another of the Doctors ideas)
and an enhanced cybernetic brain with visual augments...

The design I came up with came with the phrase in mind: "What if I mixed Adam Jenson (Deus Ex) with Stroggification (Quake 4)" and the result?

Kory's Cybernetic Parts.

Sorry for the long description but when I get started it's VERY hard to shorten it all
I JUST GOTTA EXPLAIN IT IN DETAIL! This is the major problem with me when I get ideas and stuff, I keep going ang going and it's hard to stop T_T
I can't get any SLEEP! my brain is just constantly on OVERDRIVE! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!!!

Also! don't mind the stain (i think) and the random Jonn drawing!
Fun Fact: all drawn with a WOODEN PENCIL! TAKE THAT YOU YOUNGSTERS!

-Kelrick