MaggiefromSpace [2018-04-19 08:41:11 +0000 UTC]
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This is a lovely picture, it really gives a fresh, spring season vibe! The colours (so many greens!) and the patterns make it very lively. I also like how dynamic and curvy it is when at first glance it's all straight line!
One thing that might be improved is the use of line weight. Some of the thickest, darkest lines are on the leaves, for example in the top left corner, and draw a bit of attention away from the main focus, the doe.
On the more nitpicky side, the eyelashes seem a little odd for this style, maybe they would work better as simple triangles?
Also, while overall the more bluish, lighter leaves are the ones in the background (atmospheric perspective yay, good job) the one near the bottom right looks just as "distant" in terms of colouring but overlaps the darker green leaves behind it, which looks a bit off.
Overall though this is an adorable drawing, I really like both the idea and style! I wish she'd come keep my plants alive water my plants sometime e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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