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Kemina — Ex
Published: 2005-04-20 03:43:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 149; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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She peered down at the once-flawless face and traced the cheek-bones with her fingers. Now dead and cold, it's eyes are wide open. Worried with satisfaction she breathed, "Now you can never hurt me, love."Related content
Comments: 4
Your hair is beautifully falling about your. You look like you had just gone through somethign that took physical force. Your lips look wonderful parted like that.
As far as critique...the dresser may add to the photograph, however it also draws attention away from you. Perhaps try a few close up shots of your face as well.
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I love the way your hair falls in front of your face and you have your mouth open like you are concetrating really hard and just finished with something really important......like you're stroking the face of someone you just destroyed, like you said in the poem lol. I also like the sheen of the drawers behind you 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
All in all I love it.
Chiku-chiku-chiku! [<-My happy noise. lol]
Thankiez Gen! Yess'm.. I like the way my hair fell, too. I'm not sure about the dresser/drawers things.. but they add something. Gahahaha. Thankiez for the fave, too!!
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