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Kemuri-san — Gather 'Round
Published: 2008-05-25 01:34:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Those who are dispointed in lifeGather 'round
Gather 'round
Gather 'round my lantern
This lantern is lit by the flame
Of a hundred hopes
And a thousand tears.
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Woah. I suddenly have an urge to listen to A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Forum. XD Cool.
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It's kinda cool... I was distracted by the PWNSOMENESS of the picture though. I really like that photo... It's awesome...
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its not a photo DX , i made it in photoshop.
thanks anyways.
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REALLY?!?!?! You're good...
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lulz, not that hard. i can teach you :3
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REALLY?!?!?! That's so freakin' awesome... 8D
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yeah, thank you!!! when you come over, ill show you =3
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Short but sweet. Even if the long line does sort of break the flow. :/
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I think the rhythm is put off balance by the line "This lantern is lit by the flame of a hundred hopes" being so much longer than "And a thousand tears."
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pfft, i agree but hey, where was i supposed to break it?
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"This lantern;
Lit by the flame of a hundred hopes" maybe? Iunno.
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