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GourdGirl [2008-05-29 04:11:41 +0000 UTC]
Woah. I suddenly have an urge to listen to A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Forum. XD Cool.
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Kemuri-san In reply to Hanupoppy [2008-05-25 19:40:17 +0000 UTC]
its not a photo DX , i made it in photoshop.
thanks anyways.
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Hanupoppy In reply to Kemuri-san [2008-05-25 23:23:22 +0000 UTC]
REALLY?!?!?! You're good...
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Kemuri-san In reply to Hanupoppy [2008-05-25 23:35:02 +0000 UTC]
lulz, not that hard. i can teach you :3
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Hanupoppy In reply to Kemuri-san [2008-05-27 23:58:33 +0000 UTC]
REALLY?!?!?! That's so freakin' awesome... 8D
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Kemuri-san In reply to Hanupoppy [2008-05-28 02:50:36 +0000 UTC]
yeah, thank you!!! when you come over, ill show you =3
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Darkeiya [2008-05-25 02:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Short but sweet. Even if the long line does sort of break the flow. :/
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KunoichiMawari [2008-05-25 01:36:59 +0000 UTC]
I think the rhythm is put off balance by the line "This lantern is lit by the flame of a hundred hopes" being so much longer than "And a thousand tears."
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Kemuri-san In reply to KunoichiMawari [2008-05-25 01:52:52 +0000 UTC]
pfft, i agree but hey, where was i supposed to break it?
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KunoichiMawari In reply to Kemuri-san [2008-05-25 02:00:43 +0000 UTC]
"This lantern;
Lit by the flame of a hundred hopes" maybe? Iunno.
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