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Aheniru [2017-06-29 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Oooh this looks amazing Keno!!
I love how the characters seamlessly integrate with the background ;3
I'm terrible at critiques but I'll give it a try-
The ocean looks gorgeous but I feel like it may be better if the foam doesn't cut the ocean off? Since from this perspective the characters look like they are at a reasonable depth in the water (like a little far from the coast - enough that the coast isn't seen)
If the foam is a small wave forming then it would make more sense but then it would look a little like this: www.gulfster.com/Daily/2013Pic…
I also recommend some reflective highlights on the babs since some parts of them aren't blocked by the floater things ;3
I hope this helps and if it doesn't just ignore it XD
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KenotheWolf In reply to Aheniru [2017-06-30 09:41:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh thats nice! Because I had to rush at this a bit and Paintstorm really had a bad day lol.
Do you know these typical beach pictures where a part of the water is seen like the camera was half over the water and half in the water? I actually tried that effect but I didnt used references or put enough time in it to reach that effect.
Hm? That the coast isnt seen?
Sadly the link doesnt work, can you send it again?
Hmm, hmmmm. I think i know what you mean? You mean that water reflects on the Babs?
Thanks for your feedback Darki!
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Aheniru In reply to KenotheWolf [2017-07-01 17:03:33 +0000 UTC]
oh no did it crash? :0
ohh I see that! So kind of like this? www.fatkidscake.nl/half-underw…
It would be a bit like this: Untitled Drawing (please forgive the terrible drawing XD)
The cut-off point would be where the drawing "starts"
Typically on a beach there's foam that lines the coast due to the ocean coming/going. So the cut-off point in this case is in the middle of the body of water so the likelihood of a solid area of foam is unlikely unless there's a wave forming ;3
And a wave forming would look a bit like this: (re-linking) Img 0763 (1) - the foam would have more action :3
Yup that's what I meant!
No prob ;3
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KenotheWolf In reply to Aheniru [2017-07-01 18:40:52 +0000 UTC]
Could you make a screenshot like with gyazo or something? My anti virus program wont let me check the link.
It was suppost to be like this (its the only pic i could found which has that camera position) goo.gl/images/SwsrKU
I thought it would look like this with a bit white, but maybe I was wrong.I was looking for a way to seperate it, not exactly to make foam?
I should look that up better next time, its just hard to find pictures in that angle x'D
Oh now i think i know what you mean. you mean something like this goo.gl/images/mjmfhm
truly lack of research and skill for perspective because i really dont know how to do that in that perspective XD NOOOO
I must say unless I dont spent alot of time on a piece, the usual Arpg entries are all rushed and i really dont put 100% needed time in it. *whispers*because deadlines and my rare time to draw *making excuses again*
But I totally will remind your tips, thanks for taking the time giving me those >w<
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onigiryStuff [2017-06-28 04:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Omg thnk u so much ! This is amazing
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KenotheWolf In reply to onigiryStuff [2017-06-29 10:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Your Bab really helped me to get a working idea! Like oh god when i look at my first sketch for this.
I totally need him in the next prompts sorry xD
Aw thank you so much! Glad you like it!
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onigiryStuff In reply to KenotheWolf [2017-06-29 16:03:48 +0000 UTC]
now i need to drw urs!! to enter the prompt~
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KenotheWolf In reply to onigiryStuff [2017-06-29 16:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh you are entering too? :3 thx for drawing her!
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HuntressCuddlez [2017-06-28 03:43:03 +0000 UTC]
This is so pretty oh my god I love the coloring and the background is so gorgeous!
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Applefiend [2017-06-28 02:15:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh man! it looks almost magical~!
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burrdog [2017-06-28 01:54:32 +0000 UTC]
this is sooooo cute! what a wonderful first prompt entry!!! and the water and atmosphere looks absolutely lovely <3
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KenotheWolf In reply to burrdog [2017-06-29 10:34:29 +0000 UTC]
AAH gosh thank you so much for your lovely comment qwq
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