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KessieLou — The Little Mer-Rabbit: Part 1
Published: 2010-10-28 22:18:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 5523; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 17
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Mike: And now, the mouse and rabbit brothers themselves......Mickey and....Oswald!*Mickey and Oswald slide to the stage*
Mickey & Oswald: Welcome to the show!
Oswald: Tonight is movie night at the House of Mouse
Mickey: And tonight's movie is called "The Little Mer-Rabbit!"
*zooms to Ariel with her friends and family*
Ariel: That sounds exciting!
*zooms back to Mickey & Oswald*
Mickey: It's a movie done in our own way, starring....
Oswald: Me! As the prince the mer-rabbit falls in love with.
Mickey: So sit back-
Oswald: Relax-
Mickey & Oswald: And enjoy the show!
*movie starts*
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Long ago in Denmark (around the 19th century), many people have told many differents stories about sailors and their journies.
Most of the stories either told with horrible stroms or filled with sea creatures, like sea-dragons, giant squids, sirens, and most of all....mermaids.
Today, one prince is going to be lucky enough to hear one singing.
Out in the open sea, there was a giant ship filled with sailors and five princes, enjoying this fine day.
The princes' names were Hans (Donald Duck), Christian (Mickey Mouse), Tristian (Oswald the Lucky Rabbit), Andersen (Goofy), and Abelone (Horace Horsecollar).
Hans, the middle child, was the temper-mental and practical brother of the four.
Abelone was the third eldest and was mild-mannered
Andersen, the youngest, wasn't the brightest crayon in the box, but he sure knows how to tell a good joke
Christian, the second eldest, is the polite one. But he does act a little mischivous
As for Tristian, who is the eldest and Christian's twin brother, he's one that is a smart-mouth, but still very charming and fun-loving.
All five of them love to go sailing with their dog, Anchor (Pluto), and have their own ways to entertain themselves at sea.
Today, their were going out fishing, hoping that they'll catch something
"Hey, Hands?" Andersen said to one of his brothers
"How's about hookin' up another worm on my line?"
"Andersen, how many times do I have to tell you? My name is Hans, not 'Hands'!" shouted the angery Hans, as he hooks up another finish
"Ahyuk! Thank you, Hands!" said Andersen
"It's Hans!" said Hans
Then Abelone turns over to Christian,
"Say Chris, have you seen Tristian today?" he asked his brother
"He's up in the crow's nest," answered Christan
"He has been feeling very glum today."
"About what?" questioned Abelone
"I don't know, but I'll go up and see what's the matter," Christian suggested as he puts down his fishing pole
Christian began to climb up to the crow's nest, until he reached up to where his down-hearted brother is.
"Tristian, what's been eatting you lately?" he asked
"Why don't you come down and fish with us."
Tristain turned around and begin to fallow his little brother down to the boat, and back to the other brothers
"Come on Tristian, put a smile your face," said Andersen
"You hadn't smile for weeks now," added Hans
Tristian turns over to his brothers and spoke, "I'm just feeling lonely that's all."
"Lonely? How can be lonely?" asked Abelone
"You have us and Anchor on this boat."
"Bark-bark!" Anchor barked as he comes in
"No, I mean the other kind of lonely," answered Tristian
"I long to see a beautiful girl who will love me."
"Oh, I know what you mean" said Christian
"I'm looking for a girl that is sweet and has a cute voice."
"I'm lookin' for a purty red-head that has a great laugh everytime my jokes," added Andersen
"I need a girl that is my perfect soul-mate," added Abelone
"I'm looking for one of those forgin women with tanned-skin and dark eyes" sighed Hans
"Yeah right, what you need is a woman that wears the pants in your relationship, and tries to cool your tempure, " Tristian said all-lighten up
Everyone laughed, except for Hans.
"Seriously, when I find my dream girl, I'll know she's the one when-" Tristian continued to talk, until a sound striked his ears.
It was someone singing, a woman singing, and it was the most beautiful sound that Tristian had ever heard.
"Did you hear that?" asked Tristian
"Hear what?' asked Hans
"It's singing," said Tristian, and he begin to have a love-sick look on his face
"And it's....beautiful!"
Christian began to notice that Tristian was leaning over the edge of the boat more.
"Tristian! Snap out of it! You're going to fall of the boat!" he shouted as he rushed to grab his brother
But Christian was too late to pull Tristian pul up, and both of them fell into the water.
Luckly, Andersen and Abelone pulled them up with their fishing poles.
As for the singing that Tristian heard not too long ago, it was coming from a cove, and the person who was singing it was a mer-rabbit.
The mer-rabbit's name is Aquamina (Franny Cottentail), and she is one of the foster daughters of the king of seas himself, Neptune.
Aquamina spends most of her time on land, practing for contest her father is throwing.
With her friends Flippy the Seal (Salty Seal), Magellen the Parrot (Jose Carioca), and Crusoe the Castway rooster (Panchito) to help her.
After Aquamina sang her song, Flippy began to clap his flippers together.
"That was beautiful, Aquamina" said Crusoe
"Your father would be proud of you," added Magellen, after he puts down the shell flute that he played while Aqua was singing
"Thanks guys," said Aquamina
"But the only thing that would make my dad happy is that my voice would make him even more richer."
"You think that I'll make it into the concert, Flippy?" she asked her pet seal
"Arf-rf!" replied Flippy
"I'll take that as a 'yes,' " said Aqua
"Bye Mag, bye Crusoe!" she waves good-bye to her land friends before she swam into the ocean
"Adios, amiga!" waved Crusoe
"See you, tomarrow" added Magellen
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Comments: 37
This is a very cute story so far! 
But can I give you a little criticism? I noticed a few spelling mistakes (e.g. "storms" instead of "stroms")
and I'm sort of wondering why the layout is like that if it is supposed to be a story and not entirely in script form.
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Thanks.
Sorry, about that.
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You're welcome.
It's okay. I've done the same thing. Next time, why don't you try using spell check or have someone proofread it for you before you post it?
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Wow! Thats really good ^^
But I though mermaids were Greek/Roman myths... or was the Sirens? Ah well
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Good work, as always. Now if only I could be more motivated to do my Little Mermaid parody.
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Interesting. A bit confusing due to everyone having different names but I like it.
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Thanks. It's like "Mickey's Christmas Carol," where Mickey and friends go by the names of their characters they are playing (Like Mickey goes by Bob Cratchet, Donlad goes by Fred, and Goofy Jacob Marley).
In this case:
Oswald the Lucky Rabbit= Tristian
Mickey Mouse= Christian
Donald Duck= Hans
Goofy= Andersen
Horace Horsecollar= Abelone
Fanny/Ortensia= Aquamina
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Oh, I see. I haven't see that special for a long time so I kind a forgot.
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Alright. Well have you ever thought of doing a spoof of star wars with your character?
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I'm just saying it's rare to see characters from loonatics unleashed dressed as star wars characters. I mean I'm not exactly a fan of star wars bu cosplays are always awesome.
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Oh I can tell already this is gonna be a totally awesome fanfic!
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