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Description Reads right to left, manga style. Characters including Shizuha Aki w/o hat, and Minoriko Aki from Touhou. I only personally presume that Shizuha, as an imouto would call out her sister, Riko to display a more intimate relationship.

Trying to make a comic for first time. It was painstaking compared to a regular illustration. Maybe I should've stick with grays. OTL

Hope experienced ones could give out pointers, especially in panel usage.

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edit: Spruced up the image abit. The leaves now look alot more believable, no?


Shizuha Aki & Minoriko Aki (c) ZUN
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Comments: 47

pengguchan [2013-02-17 15:43:46 +0000 UTC]

so? where's the next page?

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ashchistyle [2010-05-05 02:41:07 +0000 UTC]

NICE COLOUR!!

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LetsDanmaku [2009-10-16 10:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, this is WAY better than what I'm able to do so far.

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VanillaLuvv [2009-08-19 03:54:43 +0000 UTC]

kawaii! x3

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Adeshark [2009-04-30 08:23:29 +0000 UTC]

WOW! XD

These colored comic strips are awesome!

Yours looks professional too!

was it hard to make? :3

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kevynleo In reply to Adeshark [2009-08-21 11:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Hi, sorry for the late reply.

Thanks, it took me about a day to finish up one page. Sketch, inking and coloring.

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basketofseals [2009-04-06 19:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice artwork, but I think you got their personalities backwards.

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BlitzkregOperative [2009-01-20 18:45:15 +0000 UTC]

lol a poke on the cheek

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kokonAFL [2008-06-27 19:21:31 +0000 UTC]

nice nice well done

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kouma-kyou [2008-03-21 15:13:20 +0000 UTC]

*_* The Aki twins

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shalala-kirakiralin [2007-09-30 01:20:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying to work on a manga right now but it'll neva be as goodsies as that!!TUT

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kevynleo In reply to shalala-kirakiralin [2007-10-03 14:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Don't be discouraged, all you need is practice. I'm still not getting there as well. Every time I draw is a good practice for me. Good luck!

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shalala-kirakiralin In reply to kevynleo [2007-10-03 21:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!! thats very good advice...XD

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ayuICHI [2007-09-25 01:26:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha, how fun and sillies :9

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kevynleo In reply to ayuICHI [2007-09-25 07:39:46 +0000 UTC]

yes it is

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ayuICHI In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-25 21:40:43 +0000 UTC]

xDD

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fire-doused [2007-09-24 07:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Neat and nicely done, although I bear with the fact that comic panels in colors are so much painstaking.

Trying to tone them in grayscale is equally painful as well, I gave up after too much hours spent on three panels and yet still not producing satisfactory results (to my liking).

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kevynleo In reply to fire-doused [2007-09-24 13:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Ima try grays next

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fire-doused In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-25 15:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Gambare!

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kevynleo In reply to fire-doused [2007-09-26 19:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I shall use all my utmost strength in doing manga! <- lies

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raemz-desu [2007-09-24 02:27:12 +0000 UTC]

orz
lunatic is too hard for mountain of faith

yo style matchez thiz kind of thing alotz

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kevynleo In reply to raemz-desu [2007-09-24 12:01:12 +0000 UTC]

ZUN is trying to kill us

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raemz-desu In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-24 23:37:50 +0000 UTC]

gah i can only beat stage 3 and it took me forever
stage 4 is D:


and it'z my first touhou dat i ever played alzoz

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kevynleo In reply to raemz-desu [2007-09-26 04:40:51 +0000 UTC]

I think Imperishable Night might be a better touhou to start with. It's much easier than others.

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yo-chaosangel [2007-09-23 13:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Thats pro enough^^
And trust me, 20p of manga kills you. So this is very good!

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kevynleo In reply to yo-chaosangel [2007-09-23 14:25:31 +0000 UTC]

lolz 20pages =_=

Maybe gray tones are much easier. Coloring manga is too time consuming.

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yo-chaosangel In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-23 16:29:29 +0000 UTC]

I think it is better to do it colour and then grayscale it later

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fire-doused In reply to yo-chaosangel [2007-09-24 07:22:49 +0000 UTC]

XP

Except for the base skin colors, they must be left white. Else an intended fair skin will appear dark when grayscaled.

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yo-chaosangel In reply to fire-doused [2007-09-24 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes that is correct ><

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ForbiddenImmortality [2007-09-23 12:47:33 +0000 UTC]

ahhahahahahahh~~!!!

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kevynleo In reply to ForbiddenImmortality [2007-09-23 17:59:47 +0000 UTC]

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-24 05:28:35 +0000 UTC]

hahahhahaha
back

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xiaoness [2007-09-23 03:16:19 +0000 UTC]

ahhh!! so cute.. i wuv ur style and ur characters!!
err.. did u manually draw/color the bground?

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kevynleo In reply to xiaoness [2007-09-23 06:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I made a custom brush for the leaves. The rest is hand drawn/painted.

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fantasywar2 [2007-09-22 23:00:10 +0000 UTC]

great work like ur cute look

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kevynleo In reply to fantasywar2 [2007-09-23 06:52:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Acorn-Chan [2007-09-22 22:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, very nice... great colors, too It's very well put together, but there is one little thing you could fix.... in the first speech bubble, it should say, "How did the ceremony go?" instead of "How did the ceremony went?" Little grammatical thing, though :3

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kevynleo In reply to Acorn-Chan [2007-09-23 06:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Okies, fixed. Thanks! English is not my mother tongue so I'm not very eloquent in it. D:

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Acorn-Chan In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-23 12:44:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3 It wasn't much of a mistake; the rest sounds just fine. Ahaha, I envy the people on dA like you that use English so well as a second language... I'm trying to learn French, but I'm still not ~that~ good at it

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kevynleo In reply to Acorn-Chan [2007-09-23 14:34:32 +0000 UTC]

It'll be fine if you take it slowly. I'm learning Japanese as well.

The education system in my country forces us to learn 2 languages in school, the other being Malay. Thats how I ended up speaking multiple languages, but none of them are at native level ._.

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Acorn-Chan In reply to kevynleo [2007-09-23 15:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes... I'm getting there :3 This is my fifth year taking French, so it's not like I can't understand speech or text in French I can read French and understand spoken French very well, actually, but when it comes to doing the speaking myself... meh, I could be better. We're no longer allowed to speak in English in my French class unless we ask to do so (in French, of course), so that's helping

I would love to learn Japanese... I can understand a ~little~ and have almost entirely memorized the Hiragana and Katakana scripts. If they offer it at whatever college I end up going to in a few years, I'd love to actually learn it

The educational system here in the USA doesn't make you learn any languages, but it's highly recommended since a lot of colleges look for people who have experience with foreign languages, and there is an increasing part of the population that speaks two languages (mostly Spanish-speaking immigrants, it seems, though I don't really have much interest in learning Spanish at all XD).

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kevynleo In reply to Acorn-Chan [2007-09-27 18:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes, the companies are going after grads that are able to converse in multiple languages these days.

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XLAKSN [2007-09-22 22:03:40 +0000 UTC]

oh my god! im exactly like that!!!

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XLAKSN In reply to XLAKSN [2007-09-23 16:34:53 +0000 UTC]

im totally tellin the truth

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kevynleo In reply to XLAKSN [2007-09-23 06:38:16 +0000 UTC]

no wai!

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candyheartz [2007-09-22 21:16:50 +0000 UTC]

so cool!
this looks really professional

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kevynleo In reply to candyheartz [2007-09-23 06:38:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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