Comments: 19
non-emo-vampire [2006-09-10 15:52:26 +0000 UTC]
oooooo cool. I'd love to see this in color!
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StarSeekerDragoness [2006-09-04 19:13:07 +0000 UTC]
I can just see the colours in this. Seriously, the
colours I see are blacks, purples, blues, some
golden-yellows, a little bit of greens hues, maybe a
bit of red...maybe a slightly tanned skin...uumm...
maybe some pearly colours...or opal...what else...
whites...but not much...*shrugs* Can't think of any
other colours, except what I listed. Heh...
You know what would look interesting? If you made
her hair look like the universe. Ya know, like at the
beginning of her hair, it would look like regular raven
black hair...but near the middle and end, stars would
emerge, and planets, galaxies, comets...maybe even
a faint view of the Milky Way...
But that's what my mind is thinkin'...I know your mind
is thinkin' something entirely different. And that's cool.
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Rebbe-Dragon [2006-09-04 16:19:00 +0000 UTC]
I love all the pretty, long, wavy hair splaying everywhere.
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blueicefox54 [2006-09-04 14:23:56 +0000 UTC]
so good so far
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KoulFireChick [2006-09-04 13:56:12 +0000 UTC]
wow it's pretty! I know it's not done but its still really nice
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WielderOfTwilight [2006-09-04 13:25:59 +0000 UTC]
You know, if you kind of left the hair as is, made the underside all distinctly detailed and shadowed with the black, and used blue and white higher, the fade wouldn't distract so much from her. I'm afraid at this point, if you continued filling in the black, the frame of her face would take away from her...
Too much black, overpowering, and imbalanced I mean.
Since she is supposed to be the water goddess, I would suggest keeping her hair dark, but blue and lighter as it goes towards the top. Let it meld with the water she's immersed in. It would create a kind of magical effect, some dynamics with the flow (connectivity with water and hair), AND she won't look like she has a gigantic afro in the end
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KeyshaKitty In reply to WielderOfTwilight [2006-09-05 00:16:33 +0000 UTC]
*sighs* I REALLY wish people would take notice of the 'crit discourage' message on the comment section. I KNOW you're offering advice on your POV, but for one thing - the black is part of the character't design...always HAS been. One of the reasons I don't want crit until it's finished is just because of that - nobody can see the final picture asides the artist - until it's actually finished.
If it was a pic I was looking for improvement on, I'd happily take crits. But this...really isn't one I'm looking onto for.
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WielderOfTwilight In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-09-05 00:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, my mistake entirely. Seems D.V 5 has made the text less noticeable...
I tend to need the red X. Forgive me...
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KeyshaKitty In reply to WielderOfTwilight [2006-09-05 01:42:30 +0000 UTC]
It's alright. ^^ I only just noticed that they don't have the symbols up any more, and the crit-choice text isn't exactly very clear. Honest mistake. ^^
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Teh-Nika [2006-09-04 12:29:38 +0000 UTC]
I like the hair^^ Awesome Pic!
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Benkku [2006-09-04 11:02:11 +0000 UTC]
The hair looks very pretty. And her clothes too ^_^
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