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Khana-Shimmi — Peter Wind
Published: 2011-10-25 12:11:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 699; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 7
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This is a work I did in order to be the cover of my friend 's book. Her short story "The city of Silence" will be printed soon and it will be the very first publication for both of us. I can't tell how much I'm happy for her and how I'm glad she asked me to do the illustrations ! She is very talented anyway, and I hope that she will have a lot of sucess with her future books and stories.This version is just a WIP, and there's a lot of thing I would like to fix... I wanted it to be so perfect ! ^_^' But I know it's impossible...
Please give me your opinion to help me to improve it !
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That's beautiful! I love violin players! You know, he reminds me of Fai (or Fay or Fye or whatever) from Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles.
As someboby else said, fingers need to be fixed... and I think his mouth looks too small. Try to make it a little bit larger...
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Yeah that's true, he's got something of Fai/Fye/whatever.
Omg, now I see so much mistakes in this draw...
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Not that much, don't worry. Nothing you will not fix in... uhm... 15 minutes.
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This is beautiful! I love the violin and his hair really looks great against the dark sky. Maybe his fingers is the part could improve a little.
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Yeah, I know the fingers aren't very good...But I'm glad you like the hair, I had a hard time doing it --'
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Ouaw! c'est magnifique!
si tu veux l'améliorer, je pense que tu devrais revoir les doigts...Ils me paraissent bizarres ^^
C'est le seul défaut que je peux trouver pour t'aider ! XD
Beau travail
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Merci ! Pour les doigts, j'avais pensé à les refaire, mais en fait ils seront cachés par le titre du bouquin donc ce ne sera surement pas la peine, mais merci quand même pour ton avis, tout est bon à prendre !
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Ah oui, dans ce cas là, j'ai rien à redire
De rien, j'éspère que ce sera un succès! ^^
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Pain tool sai (: Directement par ordi.
Merci en tout cas !
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C'est super réussi!!!De rien^^
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