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ThePoppymist [2018-05-23 02:29:24 +0000 UTC]

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A H H H H M E H T E M M Y G O S H L O O K A T I T ! ! ! ! !
I T L O O K S S O G O O D ! ! ! ! ! !
W O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O W !
Really nice work! The lines look really nice, colors look good.
Just, this is so good...we need the art police to confinscate this because it's so g o o o o o o o d ! ! !
VERY VERY VERY VERY VERYYYYY GOOD!

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Lulukittie [2018-04-15 21:58:44 +0000 UTC]

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It looks very nice. The character is somewhat simple but still looks very nice. The color scheme looks very nice however because blue and black blend a little well so maybe another color that contrasts the base colors as an ascent would look nice. The lines look smooth however try making the corners pointy. The eyes are facing at the middle of the face so unless that was intentional try changing the direction they're facing and add a little shine in them if you want them a lil cuter or just as a very small touch. No much else but to sum it up it looks very simple but yet very nice and try adding a lil more detail to the eyes, adding a color that stands out for an ascent, and pointing then lines up a bit. Hope this helps!

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Lulukittie In reply to Lulukittie [2018-04-16 02:05:56 +0000 UTC]

So sorry I din't mean blue and black I meant blue and purple. My bad

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Kyflpa [2018-01-26 02:18:26 +0000 UTC]

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You should honestly draw more in this series! The style is nice, and gives it a cartoony feel. I'd really like to see other characters in this style! You'd make a good artist for this tbh. Every time I see this I keep thinking you've done more art of this but I get sad when I remember It's just this (so far, anyways). Adding more would be nice, and I'd probably favorite all your artwork having to do with it haha e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>

anywho, great picture and keep it up!

filler filler filler filler filler filler filler I hate the fact critiques have you say extra stuff

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AuroraTheApprentice [2018-01-24 00:37:26 +0000 UTC]

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I like the colors you used for this but there are a few problems that stand out.

one is the proportion of the person is all over the place, the head is abnormally large and looks like you drew the head and neck, Then drew the body, making them fine on there own, but drastically different when put together,

a way to fix this is to do a rough sketch whilst looking at some references on anatomy. More precisely, looking at the size ratio of the body parts relative to each other.

two is the eyes and placement of the face parts. the nose is off center and looks to be closer to the left eye than the right. even at the angle of the face, it shouldn't be there.

a simple fix is to draw two lines on the base head shape to signify the roundness and angle of the head, then draw the facial features accordingly

a example of this is
How to Draw Canines: Head

(if the link doesn't work ill comment it )

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meyyyw [2018-01-22 12:47:05 +0000 UTC]

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it really good and simple i love to see more of this style but there is so many people using this same style that is why it is not original any more

but you don't need to change
just make the character to do something cool like jump you sky diving or throwing up

pls make it throw up it will look so grouse i will lose my launch

so what are you witting for throw up now so we can see

i am sorry i should say it like that

please throw up so we can watch ?
can you

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Khushi-1428 In reply to meyyyw [2018-01-22 12:59:58 +0000 UTC]

No it's okay! <3
Thanks for the critique and points~! <3

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meyyyw In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-23 09:14:11 +0000 UTC]

you are coolΒ  andΒ 

i make comic called papercutcomic have fun


tapas.io/episode/958751

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Khushi-1428 In reply to meyyyw [2018-01-23 09:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sure! <3

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Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:45:21 +0000 UTC]

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A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A
My god!
Thank you!
And this artwork will be selected for the contest!

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rachellewolf In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-02-16 16:21:10 +0000 UTC]

hey can i redraw this XP pweez u can have the pic if i can

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to rachellewolf [2018-02-17 01:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Sure!
Just credit me!

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rachellewolf In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-02-17 21:30:10 +0000 UTC]

i drew thisΒ 

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to rachellewolf [2018-02-17 21:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Show me.

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Yw! <3
You had commented. xD

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AuroraTheApprentice [2018-01-24 00:37:40 +0000 UTC]

How to Draw Canines: Head

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Khushi-1428 In reply to AuroraTheApprentice [2018-01-24 01:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Memossino [2018-01-22 10:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Noice

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Memossino [2018-01-22 10:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:46:18 +0000 UTC]

A trans boy(even though he's not trans at all.XD)

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh lol xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 09:48:14 +0000 UTC]

XD
Kori's name sounds more female than male.Unlike Kin.XD

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh.. xD
MAN I WANT WATER-BUCKET IN YA STORY XD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 09:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Is waer bucket your object oc?

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Yep! xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 09:53:33 +0000 UTC]

If your artwork wins,she get to play a major role in a episode

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 09:59:31 +0000 UTC]

WOAHHH HO HO HO YEAH BABY XD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Along with 15 points.

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:33:20 +0000 UTC]

I know. xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:34:39 +0000 UTC]

If your artwork wins,you'll get to choose which hero you want to capture your akuma.XD

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Okayy xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:35:26 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:35:35 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Shine Like A Diamond.......

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:36:59 +0000 UTC]

I shine lol

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Someone's title Artwork

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh... xD

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Guess who this relates to XD

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:55:00 +0000 UTC]

?

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Twirl-Angeline In reply to Khushi-1428 [2018-01-22 10:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Someone...soon...

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Khushi-1428 In reply to Twirl-Angeline [2018-01-22 10:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh..

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