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Kilty-As-Charged [2011-03-09 19:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Tis off to a nice start~ I have a few recommendations though. Never ever use comic-sans, that is the biggest joke in the comic world ever. Check out this site for some nice comic fonts- [link] ~ This page has too many panels, though I find it hard to tell where one starts and another ends. Try to keep the gutters a consistent size too. One thing I would love, love to see with your art is some line weight. It would make things look a little less 2 dimensional. One last thing that would be super cool, backgrounds! I mean there is a bed, and a door but they could be anywhere, like a closet or a prison cell. There's bound to be something on the walls in this room and more furniture besides a bed and a side table? And watch it, you broke the 360 rule in that last set of panels. ;D

I hope you don't mind me giving tips! :3

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