avaunt [2019-04-04 05:00:44 +0000 UTC]
The folds on the fabric look great! Something about the girl being pulled out of the water seems off, though, like she isn't affected by gravity? I think it may be because of the direction her hair is going . . . something about her arm sticking up, too, seems like it's too light, if that makes sense? If she's being pulled out of the water I feel like the force of that would make it difficult for her to lift her arm up all the way like that. I like the start of this, though! The water looks really promising with the illumination.
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