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Published: 2005-06-26 13:02:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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~the wind softly whipers into my ear....telling me a love story, softening my hard heart....
destroying, this weapon of fear....
but failing.....reminding me of the pain when we had to depart....
breaking me.....forcing me down onto my knees....
drowning....in these pain filled tears....
slowly slipping.....again into this valley fear....
doubt....saying that you and i cannot be.....
slowly crushing my already broken heart....
to explain my love for you...i wouldnt know where to start....
already knowing your answer....
each word you said.....ingraved into each different broken piece....
each breath you take....is like a storm....
...blowing away.....
.....pieces of my heart.....
Comments: 1
this is very stong and emotive, great selection of similies and metaphors...
~+~OpperationE~+~
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