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Published: 2017-09-25 23:01:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 2
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Betsumon wallpaper inspired by "Game Over" as found in Homestuck.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGbVlq…
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DISCLAIMER: THE LINK LEADS TO MY ACCOUNT FOLDER CALLED "critweaking" WHICH I HAVE CREDITED THE ART AND THE ARTEST. PLEASE NOTE I AM NOT TRYING, ATTEMPTING, OR EVEN THINKING ABOUT STEALING THIS BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK. HOWEVER, I AM A VISUAL PERSON, AND I THINK I EXPRESS CRITIQUES BY SHOWING MISTAKES. :thumb706414436:
SEE 1:
The left sholder looks like it has been detached from the body, a great fix would be to cover up espeon's "shadow line" going over the body. Cover it up 3/4 away from the neck and paint over it.
SEE 2:
The marks on the espeon's muzzle and sholder look bland with a one color tone of red. Try putting a light orange on some or all of the marks to get that emphasis effect.
SEE 3:
The light source looks like it is missing on the espeon's tail. The head is further back than the tails (even one the tails srupass the arm) so where is the light sorce?
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the lighting is the same on the tail, its just the tail turns a darker shade of blue the closer to the twin tails it is
the scars are like that on the character design itself, they arent supposed to look interesting, theyre just marking, and theyre old and unimportant in the picture
thats not where the light source is coming from.
hes supposed to be looking at the ground/water thinking
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An intresting understanding coming from the viewpoint of the artist.
Nevertheless, this is what I saw and this is how I projected it as.
Have a good day.
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