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Published: 2004-07-28 23:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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Description here i hide...with no pride...behind my soul that has died..
someday i will find...a peacful place in my mind...where i ll never be in a bind...
my heart is black as coal...along with my soul...ill bury it in a hole..

whats this life for...
i feel like a whore..
being paid juz to be poor..
praying in front of deaths door..

here i'll bleed in my shell..here i'll die in my hell...hearing deaths bell...
i fall to my knees...ashamed to beg please...as my body starts to freeze...
don t know who i am..but still me they condemn..for pain they will send...

whats this life for...
i feel like a whore..
being paid juz to be poor..
praying in front of deaths door...

some think lifes juz a game...where some get the fame..to me it s all the same...
some learn hate...some belive in fate..some wait for that open gate..
here ill be...under that dark tree..waitin to be free..
so..

whats this life for...
i feel like a whore...
being paid juz to be poor...
praying in front of deaths door...
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Comments: 6

DragonSlayer79 [2004-07-29 01:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Hey man!! I really like this one!!! Great work!!! Keep it up!

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KillDaWn18 In reply to DragonSlayer79 [2004-07-29 05:07:04 +0000 UTC]

thanx dude heh

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DragonSlayer79 In reply to KillDaWn18 [2004-07-29 06:02:34 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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Crazy1881 [2004-07-28 23:16:33 +0000 UTC]

I think thats a really good poem zac.truely emotional like all ur work has been.. wonderful work

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KillDaWn18 In reply to Crazy1881 [2004-07-29 05:07:59 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much. i am glad u like it

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Crazy1881 In reply to KillDaWn18 [2004-07-29 06:26:38 +0000 UTC]

not a problem at all zac

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