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KillDaWn18 — nothing but a lie
Published: 2004-07-20 14:12:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description all the feelings  u portray...
all the times u had me in dismay...
hearing the words that u say...
i take them and throw them all away...

i wuz stupid....
i belived our feelings were real...
i felt it when i would looked into your eyes...
it wuz hidden in the skyes...
now...
there nuttin but lies...


all the feelings that u finally told...
all the times i swore to let u go...
but for some reason u i still hold...
so now this u must know..

i am stupid...
i belive our feelings r real...
i feel it when i look into your eyes....
i can see it hidding in the skyes...
yet i know...
its nuttin but my lies....

all the times that i needed to let u go...
all the times that i heard that echo..
all the feelings u did nt know...
it s all stuffed deep below....

am i stupid??...
or do u belive our feelings r real??....
do u feel it when u look into my eyes??...
tell me, is it still hiddin in the skyes??....
so i ask u...
is it nuttin but a lie??....
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Comments: 4

WarthogDemon [2008-06-09 01:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Nice, though you should spell out all the words.

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Crazy1881 [2004-07-20 23:52:13 +0000 UTC]

i like this piece of your work..your a good poet..keep it up.. i will post more of my work sometime soon

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KillDaWn18 In reply to Crazy1881 [2004-07-21 13:30:04 +0000 UTC]

thank u and kewl let me know when ya do i will check them out

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Crazy1881 In reply to KillDaWn18 [2004-07-21 20:38:01 +0000 UTC]

okay i will let you know.i have one up so far but i will be puttin more up..i will definately let you know and not a problem

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