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EleFlames [2015-10-05 17:30:08 +0000 UTC]
If this keep on happening where are the rest of the llamas?Good Story
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ToxicWyvern [2014-09-29 06:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Great story, and I like what you did with the ending.
The transformation sequence was good, but I think that it would have been easier to follow if the paragraph should have been split up (start a new paragraph whenever one of Trish's thoughts came up)
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killerpen In reply to ToxicWyvern [2014-09-30 00:11:43 +0000 UTC]
Great idea for future stories! I have always had some trouble finding where to break off a paragraph. Sometimes it just feel like I need to keep all the action together. Anyway thanks for the tips and for liking the story.
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SketchySeraph [2014-09-23 03:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah, yay! I love it, thanks! Great to see you back, man. ^_^
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SketchySeraph In reply to killerpen [2014-09-23 04:10:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, you never see llama or alpaca tfs--which is kind of a shame because they're so fluffy!
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