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killersteven — Sylph at the beach

Published: 2009-09-08 04:00:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1579; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 17
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Description This is Sylph the sexy temptress from my original story "Between The Stars." Its her day off and she decided to spend it the beach. Wanna see what happens next?


If you see any flaw in this pic please speak up it will really help me study the human form. Your opinion is appreciated.
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RiannijRyu [2009-09-09 14:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I happened across one of your deviations on the front page, and was looking through your gallery...

You seem to have a pretty good understanding of anatomy, with a few mistakes. [link]

To save time, I've drawn over your image with some minor corrections - for instance, her neck is a bit too wide. The clavicle should always be perpendicular to the head.

Also, not only is her breast size unnatural (though that's sort of up to you, I guess), they're hanging unnaturally. If she were standing in that position, her chest would naturally be pointing up a bit more.

Other things, like the placement of the calf muscle and the shape of the heel, are more minor, and I'm sure with a bit more practice your anatomy will look very nice.

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killersteven In reply to RiannijRyu [2009-09-09 14:37:38 +0000 UTC]

thnx for your input. I'm still studying anatomy on the human form so it's rough I know but I hope to improve soon.

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RiannijRyu In reply to killersteven [2009-09-09 14:41:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem!
I'm sure you'll pick it up quickly. You know the parts, it just takes practice to get them all in just the right places.

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killersteven In reply to RiannijRyu [2009-09-09 14:44:17 +0000 UTC]

once again thnx much

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