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Published: 2007-06-07 06:06:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 598; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 10
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joyfulmusic [2008-04-12 02:43:55 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! I saw it on gaia and followed your link here. Wonderful work!

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Tsukiyono-Miyu [2007-07-12 03:32:38 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful piece, I especially love the flowers in the enlarged version. DA won't let me comment on the larger piece for some reason though...or maybe you just disabled comments and I am just being dorky. :B

Anyway, it's really nice to see this finished, because I knew it had great potential when you first started it.

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kimaya In reply to Tsukiyono-Miyu [2007-09-04 06:21:13 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* Thanks!!! Where are you hiding?

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Tsukiyono-Miyu In reply to kimaya [2007-09-05 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

XD Hehehe....I'm not really hiding, just being a little neglectful of DA.

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zhoushijie [2007-06-14 01:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work. I'm always amazed by the amount of detail you put into your pieces. @___@ <333

Lovely art. Very graceful and flowing and ethereal. :'D

Oddly, this is reminiscent (for me) of the first picture I saw by you. I can't seem to recall the name but I first saw your art in Songjewel's contest. I think your signature art was like this (was it the same character?)... Anyways, I do adore your art. <3

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kimaya In reply to zhoushijie [2007-06-15 05:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Hi there, nice to hear from you ^^. Yes I began this piece a *long* time ago... its one I've worked on and off for over a year actually... like back in february 06 (well I took a year off from art would be more precise). Its changed along the way, as do my pieces which I spend extended time on learning something. This one was the flowers and the wings and trying to expand on detailing and texture... I knew how to draw wings with pencil, but not how to paint them. Now I do ^_~.

Thanks btw!

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Cseyizan [2007-06-07 19:44:26 +0000 UTC]

I've been waiting for new artwork from you since forever! This is a gorgeous, gorgeous piece. I love how you colour.

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kimaya In reply to Cseyizan [2007-06-07 19:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh~ hehehe.. yes, Im somewhat in an art block these days.. and busy with school. Thanks so much for the compliment I will try to do a little more art than a little less art XD.

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Cseyizan In reply to kimaya [2007-06-07 20:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome. And take your time. I'm happy to have a beautiful new creation of yours to look at.

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El-Chupacabras [2007-06-07 09:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

Gorgeous, Kimaya! The colors are so soft and I love what you did with the lighting, especially on the folds of the dress. And you got so many beautiful little deatails in it, like chains on the earring.

...and all those flowers

Really, a brilliant piece! I love her expression, too!

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kimaya In reply to El-Chupacabras [2007-06-07 19:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Berzerker!! Hi!! ^^ Nice to hear from you (Ive been somewhat MIA!)... thanks so much for the warm compliments!! *hugs*

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cmalidore [2007-06-07 06:47:37 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, miss . I know it would be a bit late for a critique but I'd like to point something out if that's okay?

You have an image built on the shapes of curves. This I like. But on the right side of the image, in your background I'm seeing straight edge elements (rays of light?). Visually this pulls us out of the scene a little (and don't worry I'm consulting the full image as I type this as to not shoot myself in the foot). We get pulled in by the gentle breeze, the flowing hair, the twirl to the outfit, and then we're sucked up to the right by a group of sudden lines. While they are softly composed as far as the values go - this is an inconsistency compositionally. It's obviously not a big thing - but sometimes the small things add up. Something to keep in mind ^_^.

Recurring shapes are a big key to making a picture make people go "wow" .

That aside, thanks for sharing the detail to this. I love her hair and wings. They flow so well.

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kimaya In reply to cmalidore [2007-06-07 19:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Heya chris, thanks so much for the crit... I was not too sure about those lines actually, maybe even feeling a bit compelled to put them in to account for such a huge amount of light? Do you think it would be best to just brighten that area without lines to suggest the light or remove the light entirely? As far as lighting goes, you know I have such a hard time of it. Or is there really no way to fix it now that I've gone and given her that very bright light source?

Its never too late for critiques for me... I work on things long after they are done if something is bothering me, and besides I can take it into account next time, especially since my focus right now is trying to understand composition of scenes (which is one of your strengths). I would like to eventually be able to do more illustrations (thats my goal anyway) and less character art. I know I am a long way from it, but I am headed that direction.

Thanks again

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cmalidore In reply to kimaya [2007-06-08 23:03:47 +0000 UTC]

I wish I knew how I would fix it.... I really don't know. It is a fine space filler, but I think that without it you'll have a lot of empty space. I do like the light on the figure, it really sets her out well, I think the big question is "is there anything that you could put in that space that won't be overwhelming, but will still allow you to show off the light a little. Items perhaps, other figures, structures, etc. Maybe even pulling the petal element through there a little would help, then layer behind it something far in the distance like a structure or land formation.

Just little thoughts though. I've never been good with pretty things haha.

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kimaya In reply to cmalidore [2007-06-09 00:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well I will leave it alone (easier that way and lazier too XD) unless I think of something. Thank you again for the advice, I will definitely keep it more in mind on my next images. Thats kind of a new one for me, the shapes, I don't even think I ever gave it thought before but it makes sense ... dynamics wise I am pretty much taking them off of the edge of the image with the lines.

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farcry77 [2007-06-07 06:07:40 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work. Serene and lovely color scheme too.

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kimaya In reply to farcry77 [2007-06-07 19:53:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much! ^^ I like working with those colors.

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farcry77 In reply to kimaya [2007-06-08 01:06:38 +0000 UTC]

u r welcome

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KuroMitsukai [2007-06-07 06:07:33 +0000 UTC]

that looks really really pretty! i like how u did the shading and coloring and all i like the flowers and the wings ^__^

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kimaya In reply to KuroMitsukai [2007-06-07 19:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you I enjoyed doing all those little flowers (Ha! JK!). XD

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KuroMitsukai In reply to kimaya [2007-06-08 05:17:57 +0000 UTC]

lol no problem ^__^

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