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boxofpeaches [2011-02-11 23:58:19 +0000 UTC]
I love the little tidbits of character pasts that are popping up!! You're really starting to paint a picture with your humans.
Also, SAD> D: but babies?!
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scaramouche2802 [2011-01-29 19:51:33 +0000 UTC]
@_@
BOTH YAY AND NOOO
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Azolio [2011-01-29 18:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Oooh! I love it!
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Pliochippus In reply to Kimblewick [2011-02-01 14:06:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure I will, just not for a while... I'm jam packed as it is, AND I've got nuts and I'm trying to get 2 horses from auctions Kay, well, I don't want to seem like I'm nitpicking or anything, I just thought I'd highlight things that caught my eye while reading, hopefully it will all be usefull, and not just outright insulting
"Now it was the turn of the Red&Sky double to show the world that the Classics were theirs. The bell rang."
- no bell in UK starting stalls
"The infamous Rowley Mile dip loomed ahead, and all was quiet on the Western Front, every horse held his position. Every jockey held his breath, hoping that their rhythm of strides would continue out the other side. Like a wave, the field of eighteen plunged down."
- plunged makes it sound like the dip is a dramatic drop. Infact, the decline is reasonably gradual, though noticable, and it is the incline that is steeper. Also... it is widely known among jockeys that you want to start making a move as you head down into the dip, so that the momentum from the increased speed will carry the horse up out of it. Its not often that jockeys, especially all of them, will "hold their position". Oh, and in the UK, field sizes are limited to 14, except in big handicaps like the Ebor, Cesarewitch, Cambridgeshire etc. And thats only flat racing, cause I'm sure you've noticed that the Grand National has 40 horses lol
"A stable one-two was rare enough, not to mention a trainer one-two."
- In the UK, that is exactly the same thing. All horses are trained in a "stable" by one trainer and maybe some assistants. One trainer can have many different owners for the horses in his stable. Just a by the by, while we're talking about it, in the UK, no horses train at racetracks, like they do in America and other countries. Each trainer has his own private gallops, usually long all weather synthetic surfaces, ranging from 5-12f. They also have, in most places, one or two grass gallops for serious works before a race. Occassionaly, horses have "course gallops", which is when they have a normal exercise, but on a track. Trainers often do this to get the edge back, or wind up the horse, ready for a big day. But they more often do it for young horses who have never raced, just so they can experience the track. Like I said though, its not very common, and only happens on ocassion, and on quiet days (like midweek etc). Also, almost all horses travel to the course on the day of the race, unless it's very far away (usually maximum of 8-10hrs, if travelling from south england to scotland, but most journeys take between 2-4hrs, and horses have to arrive 3hrs before the race). I think, a more accurate version of the above sentence would be; trainer one-two, owner one-two
"Sam jumped off and went to fetch some water as Graham loosened Snake’s girth."
- getting water isnt the jockeys job. That will be done by the travelling head lad, or the lad/lass who is leading up the horse. Likewise, the jockey will take off the saddle & pads etc. before going straight to the weighing room. If a jockey doesnt weigh in after a race, he will be disqualified, and possibly get a suspension. Its just a simple rule to make sure nobody cheats with the weights n stuff. Sometimes, the jockey does have time to spare a few quick words with a reporter, but usually returns after weighing in to answer any questions.
"He pulled on the reins that Freddie now held from the ground"
- see above. All of this will be done by the person who looks after the horse (someone like Mario, to Zenyatta, and me to Catchanova), never ever the jockey, unless the handler isnt there, or the jockey has to get off on course or something.
"He's alright in himself, but we’re taking him to hospital. Once the adrenaline wears out he'll feel it a lot more. We need to get him under and fixed up before he decides to flip out. The x-rays show he’s fractured his right pastern"
- a little contradicting. As you said yourself, the horse is still high on adrenaline, so he eitherwouldnt show signs of a fracture, or would be crippled lame even through the adrenaline. He wouldnt really be alright in himself. Also, I'm not certain how long this is after the race, but since youspoke about adrenaline, it must be fairly soon. A vet wouldnt be able to know as much detail as thatso quickly. He would probably be able to tell it's a fracture/break, and possibly even identify where it is. But, as far as I'm aware, he shouldnt be able to take an x-ray, not that quickly anyway. Vets do have portable x-ray machines, I've helped use them at work, but the images come up on a screen, and its not very clear, so again... he would be lacking exact details, and would be taking the horse to hospital as either a precaution, or for further investigation.
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Freawaru2020 [2011-01-29 15:02:57 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwww poor Beretta!
One little thing... Wong is a typically Chinese name, not Japanese. XD
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