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kimbolie12 — OC: niji
Published: 2012-02-11 19:09:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 675; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 15
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I re-designed my oc Niji :3she needed a new look.....really, reaallly bad OmO
look at my first design of her
OMG UGLYNESS /burns eyes
but that was a drawing from 1 year ago (......thats not so long ago.....*facepalm*)
STORY:
name: niji jones
sex: female (duh)
age: 16
date of birth: april first
rank: exorcist student
height: 164 cm
weight: 57 kg
pasttimes/talents: volleybal, being extremely shy
fav. food: lollypop (cola flavour)
favorite manga genre: comedy, romantic, shoujo-ai (dont tell her i told you that)
fav. type of boy: .....niji is gay =w=" she likes romantic girls.
other:
-she is scared of men
-her father is a drug addict and is very violent. But her mother just can't leave him behind.
-she has the power to control the wind.
-she hates her ginger hair and freckles (I LUV IT *A*)
-her nickname is freckleface
niji © kimbolie12
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Comments: 6
nice you can totally see the growth in skill from then and now. Keep at it
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Ok, let's see:
Negative:
-It's hard find out where the light source is. Like: when the light source is at the right, you have to highlight that side of her body and shade the other side. You shaded the left side a bit, but it's not really clear to see. I think you should use some darker colors to shade, which will make the light source easier to find.
-The neck is not in the middle of the shoulders
-The head seems to be a bit too big in proportion to the body
-Her feet doesn' t seemed to stand on the ground. Normally, a person who stands like that will fall. Even when you put the feet on the ground: with this pose, she will not be in balanced. The centroid is not in the middle.
-I see you used texture patterns in the clothes, but you just putted it over it cineast of wrapping it in the right form. This makes the drawing look flat. Remember that in folds, parts of the patterns will be invisible. Just wrap the pattern in the form of the clothes, and erase the parts which won' e be visible because of folds.
Positive:
-Very cute own style
-The hair is very nice colored and highlighted!
-The skirt and feet are very well-drawn
-Nice done with the shadow!
You did a very good job already, and I hope my critique will help to make you improve even more!
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she looks really cool! Lov the new look! 
:iconsummerlovplz:
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OMG ik ga niji vertellen dat jij vertelt hebt dat ze van shoujo-ai houd ;3
maar haar nieuwe design is mooi! en je bent erg vooruit gegaan o.o
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o.o' Such a cute outfit. I really like her facial expression.
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Definitely an amazing improvement! She's adorable.
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