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Uoso [2019-09-19 18:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Sooo... I know little about fish but I guess they are the golden ones. Both are very good, to be honest and I can't find anything very bad about them – only the fact that the belly of the top one may look just a little bit weird but maybe it is just me...?

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SHlNRA [2019-09-18 20:32:21 +0000 UTC]

The colors are so amazing!!   And the fish look so good oh my goodness

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2GoShowMedia [2019-09-18 19:24:24 +0000 UTC]

This is very impressive. I love the shading of her skin and her expression is almost lifelike. It looks just like her. If I do have any criticism, it's the fish. The fish are much more abstract with limited details compared to the rest of the picture (unless that's the style you were going for.) I don't draw fish very often but personally I think they should have more pronounced scales and eyes so they could match up with the rest of the picture. Aside from that, I love everything else about this. You're a very talented artist and I can't wait to see what you draw next.

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KanahaniART [2019-09-18 19:01:30 +0000 UTC]

It's me again! With some fishie advice this time (although I want to point out I'm no expert myself when it comes to these animals). I mostly agree with what Cacou said already (unless we both are just terribly mistaken about these fishies species) and I have one thing to add. With the way they are shaded, these fishie bellies look a bit too... bulgy? to me. It's kind of hard to put in words but hope this image will help in showing what do I mean:

And in reality, from what I've observed in photos I've found, it's more of a smooth transition between belly and their back. Here are some photo references where it's better visible:

Hope I explained well what do I mean

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CacouPhonie [2019-09-18 18:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Hello!
Before anything, I must say this piece really looks amazing! I just adore this pink/purple/blue palette and the texture in the hair looks amazing!
It's extremely lifelike, but expressive at the same time because of all the visible brush strokes!

Regarding the fish... I must warn you I am not really used to draw fishes too, so I may not be the best to give you advice on that :'D However I think I saw a few things that could be improved (If you're aiming for the classic fan tail goldfish, of course! x)) So, i'll try to do my best to help!

It's a bit hard to explain but the dark line surrounding their faces makes it look like the gills go all around their heads (not sure if that explanation was clear so let me add a visual example to help xD)

It may looks like the head is a bit disconnected from the body (unless of course, there is species of fish i'm not aware of whose heads look like that lol xD) If you're going for the fish on the picture, I'd suggest you make the top part of the head smoother so it feels more connected to the back! I'm pretty sure this could also be applied on the throat part ^^

The other thing I would suggest is to give harder edges to the fins, since they kind of look blurry. However, I do not know if that was a stylistic choice since it does have something interesting to it! So that's up to you

In general they look really great! I love the textures on the scales! They could be maybe a bit more anatomically accurate (especially regarding the shapes of different fins), but I'd say they work very well to me!

Anyway, I hope my comment was helpful, since I am definitely not the best at explaining with text xDD Feel free to ask if anything is unclear! You did an amazing job overall with this gorgeous piece!

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KanahaniART [2019-09-18 16:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow she looks sooo much better now! You constantly impress me with how you use criticism you get to improve your art, it's amazing

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