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KimRinzley — HTS - Life Is Good - Pt.4
#elf #fantasy #genderbender #magic #mtf #tf #tg #gateworld #transformation
Published: 2018-06-08 14:51:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 45523; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 141
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Awh... geez this page is kind of an embarrassment... Because the first frame is so good but then it's followed by the other 3 frames...Related content
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dude
i've seen your information under these comics, i mean, self-criticism is great to remind yourself that you need to improve, but damn, this stuff ain't that bad at all (though that's subjective, to say). I think what you're doing is great, and the simpler colours, shading and what-have-you works fine for a mini comic series.
I think your stuff is great, and though it may be anxiety or nerves or a fear of anything but perfection or setting low expectations upon your viewers praise, telling us how disappointed you are with your work only spoils the positives a watcher may have for it.
personally, I think this is just fine (but, I guess you could say I'm not really the one best to discuss artistic vision, outcome and quality, after you see my own work that I'm shamelessly plugging into this tangent)
I'm still very keen to see where this story heads
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Well, this comic was made like a year ago. Compared to my current level of expertise I'd say that this page is not that good, but it was good for my former level. The perspective is a little unnatural and the frames are so empty and boring. Not to mention that Falkus's expression is so doofy and ugly.
I'd give this page a 5/10. Try again, DangerCat from 2017.
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oh... rip my argument's validity, guess I shoulda done my homework before making that lengthy comment... sorry if I made unneeded drama
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I mean, it's a valid thing to say to some artists. Self-criticism is good, but I've had serious inferiority complex issues in the past (still have but they're in control now) and having issues like that can easily break your creative spirit. So it's good to have people help you validate your efforts.
Tomorrow I'll upload the first page of the Heavy Transformation Show #2 and if you thought this page was good, hoo-boy are you gonna have your mind melted
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