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kindheart525 — Clearer In Hindsight

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Description Pristine Melody and Cursive Quill had always wanted a home of their own, ever since they first started dating. While grateful for the hospitality of the Apples, who had let them live in their farmhouse since Mel had moved out of her ex’s home, they did want a little more privacy. While they had the financial means to buy a home, it was surprisingly hard to find the right house to suit their needs.

But now, after over a year of marriage, they had found that house. It was a recently-vacated place in Ponyville, small enough for two but big enough for guests to stay over. The best part was that Mel and Cursive would finally have a place to themselves, a home to call their own and live their life in without disturbing anypony else. It was the perfect place for a couple like them.

First, they had to do lots of packing and cleaning. It was a hassle, but it would be worth it in the end. Mel had put herself in charge of clearing her old stuff out of the attic, and she was doing just that one cloudy afternoon.

The mare climbed up the ladder to the rarely-visited top floor, sneezing at the copious amounts of dust that met her. It was filthy up here, but there was stuff she had to find and pack before moving out. On the bright side, there was the chance she might find something valuable in the old attic. One never knows what treasures they might find.

Mel switched on the small light and looked around at all the old boxes scattered around. Luckily, her family had made a point of labeling everything, so navigating it should be no problem. This would take no time at all!

But as Mel rummaged through each box that might be of use to her, she found herself taking a sudden trip down memory lane. Everything from old trinkets of her fillyhood, to photo albums, family heirlooms, and other belongings she’d forgot about, the mare soon lost track of time as she explored the treasure trove of memories. So many things she’d lost track of in past years, yet wanted to include in her new life. So many more boxes to lug to the new house. Mel chuckled. Funny how one lil’ trip to the attic can do that to a mare.

Just when she was about to take her stuff and go back downstairs, however, something caught Mel’s eye. It was another box, one she apparently hadn’t opened, hidden away in the corner. It was labeled “MUSIC VIDEOS” in big letters. Celestia, she hadn’t seen these in forever! Her music was her pride and joy; she couldn’t believe she hadn’t gone back and watched her old shows more often.

Mel opened up the box and marveled at all the VHS tapes packed inside. She’d have to show these to Quilly!

”I remember this,” she muttered to herself, picking one out and reading the label. All of them were familiar, she realized as she inspected each and every one of them. Except for one, tucked in near the bottom.

”My Best Friend”, it read, in Mel’s fancy cursive hoofwriting. It was a song she wrote long, long ago...and one of Quilly’s favorites too. But she was curious to see the original concert that went with it, so she slipped it into the old TV in the corner and sat down to watch it.

*****

Mistress Melodious stood upon her stage, looking out at her fans and waving in response to their loud cheers. But instead of a confident grin on her face, she wore a soft smile. And instead of her signature dress, she was almost naked, presenting herself as Pristine Melody.

”Alright, alright, simmer down y’all. This next one...is an extra special one. Y’see, I wrote this for an extra special pony in my life. One who means the world to me...so much that I asked her to spend the rest of my life with me. And she doesn’t know that I wrote this yet, so it’s a surprise. This is for you, Turq.”

The mare picked up her guitar and began to sing.

“There she goes, she's the one for me
We got the kind of love
That a blind mare can see
She is my all and all
And she's my everything
She's my seasons and my reasons
She's my summer
She's my winter
She's my spring
That's why

I'm in love with my best friend
I will love her, ooh
I will love her
‘Til the whole world ends
I’m in love with my best friend
I will love her, ooh
I will love her
Til the whole world ends!
She is my, oooh...”

Pristine Melody stood up and reached a hoof out, as the camera panned to the audience. Right in the front row, under the spotlight, a lovestruck blue pegasus beamed. She seemed to be nearly in tears as the singer pulled her up onto the stage.

The two mares stared into each other’s eyes as Pristine Melody lovingly harmonized for her. They looked so happy together, especially with the glittering diamond rings they both donned. The audience erupted into applause as the song ended and they both leaned in for a kiss...

*****

Mel shut the TV off.

She ripped the VHS out and sat in shock, a million thoughts running through her head. Oh Celestia, she thought. How could I have forgotten? I wrote that for her!

Turquoise Edge. Mel’s mind flashed back to the last time the mare had visited. How awkward she felt seeing her ex, how she’d immediately introduced her to her husband. And how she’d let Quilly unwittingly take away what was once theirs, right in front of her.

How could she have been so stupid? How could she have been so oblivious? It was all clear now. She knew Turq better than this. She didn’t come to buy apples, especially not when she’d found that exact basket scattered on the ground just hours later. No, her father had just died. And Mel knew how much he had meant to her. She was probably there looking for comfort in her hard times. And maybe...she was coming to make amends. But Mel didn’t even give her the chance.

She should’ve seen it in the look on Turq’s face. Turq was never one to be open with her feelings, but Mel knew her well enough to see past that tough-mare facade. And on that day, behind the strained smile, was pain. It was crystal clear, in the pained look in her eyes and the way her voice cracked when she said goodbye. They were the telltale signs of a mare who was trying her darndest not to burst into tears right then and there. And Turq hardly ever cried. What had Mel done? How could she have ignored how much she was hurting? Because of her?

Mel stood up with a new resolve. She had made a terrible mistake. She had hurt the pony she once loved with all her heart. But an Apple doesn’t live without making up for their wrongdoings, and she wouldn’t either.

She owed Turq an apology.

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Earlier: Not So Happily Ever After
Next: A Fresh Start

Collaboration with piidorenko

Song featured is “My Best Friend” by Hollywood Anderson
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Comments: 62

kindheart525 In reply to ??? [2019-03-01 11:43:17 +0000 UTC]

I imagine Mel would feel really bad about it and tell him the truth, but I feel like he’d understand and stop singing it. Though, he would be surprised that Mel even let him in the first place. The kids know, but they’re probably not going to bring it up.

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kindheart525 In reply to ??? [2019-03-01 11:43:17 +0000 UTC]

I imagine Mel would feel really bad about it and tell him the truth, but I feel like he’d understand and stop singing it. Though, he would be surprised that Mel even let him in the first place. The kids know, but they’re probably not going to bring it up.

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Cinnamon-Swirls [2019-02-05 04:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Omg... my hearttttt... This hurts so much but I'm glad after all these (years I'm guessing) at least both sides are owing up. As for Galaxy though, we aren't getting through to her for quite a while yet in your series I'm guessing. Heck, if Mel thinks Turq is stubborn of Linestone is stubborn, she should meet Galaxy. 

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kindheart525 In reply to Cinnamon-Swirls [2019-02-06 11:53:07 +0000 UTC]

If Turq is a 10 on the stubbornness scale, Galaxy would at least be a 15 XD Mel has met Galaxy, she knows. But she and Turq are on the way to making amends and that’s all that matters to them.

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Outrecuidance [2018-12-23 20:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Just leaving a message to say that I found the linework here really beautiful, also it's really cool to see Mel finding out she did something wrong ^^

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kindheart525 In reply to Outrecuidance [2018-12-24 22:41:09 +0000 UTC]

You can thank piidorenko for the wonderful linework!

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Outrecuidance In reply to kindheart525 [2019-01-02 13:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Yep I just checked her page, there's some great art there!

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GallantServer [2018-12-20 11:18:23 +0000 UTC]

YES FINALLY

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DanaeS [2018-12-19 08:04:57 +0000 UTC]

well... at least she found out her mistake 

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kindheart525 In reply to DanaeS [2018-12-20 13:25:01 +0000 UTC]

She may make stupid mistakes, but she’s smart enough to admit she’s wrong and want to make up for it.

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StarryOak [2018-12-19 02:18:12 +0000 UTC]

i love this new trend of everyone forgiving turquoise and abandoning galaxy's ass like they've both earned.

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kindheart525 In reply to StarryOak [2018-12-20 13:28:53 +0000 UTC]

We all do! It’s definitely been a long time coming, but finally justice is being served for both of them.

Also, I’m honored that you’ve been following this story!

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StarryOak In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-21 18:54:57 +0000 UTC]

awww, thanks, it's the least I can do since you're following mine.

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kindheart525 In reply to StarryOak [2018-12-21 23:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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StarryOak In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-22 01:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww <3

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kindheart525 In reply to StarryOak [2018-12-22 01:55:24 +0000 UTC]

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maxinemayfield [2018-12-19 00:35:44 +0000 UTC]

OHH thank goodness. I know she and Turq are very likely not getting back together, but it would be very very good for both of them to clear the air and at least be friends <3

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kindheart525 In reply to maxinemayfield [2018-12-20 13:24:24 +0000 UTC]

They’re definitely not getting back together, but they do need to at least make peace. Not only for themselves but for their children and grandchild as well.

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BatMuties [2018-12-18 22:31:16 +0000 UTC]

I hope they make up. 

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kindheart525 In reply to BatMuties [2018-12-20 13:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Do you think they will?

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BatMuties In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:50:48 +0000 UTC]

They might not get back together, but they’ll be friends again

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kindheart525 In reply to BatMuties [2018-12-20 13:52:44 +0000 UTC]

They’re definitely not getting back together, but hopefully they’ll make peace

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Miss-Barker [2018-12-18 18:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see where this goes.

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kindheart525 In reply to Miss-Barker [2018-12-20 13:23:34 +0000 UTC]

You’ll see the next part very soon

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ErisDash18 [2018-12-18 17:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Finally!

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F-ishyCookies [2018-12-18 14:02:07 +0000 UTC]

is it bad i was looking forward to this more than Galaxy getting her karma? ;u;

i just want Turq to be happy aaaaaa

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kindheart525 In reply to F-ishyCookies [2018-12-20 13:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Turq is happy now, but if Mel apologizes she’ll definitely be happier. As long as it goes well at least 

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EdGeYbOiSs [2018-12-18 12:11:30 +0000 UTC]

she low-key forgot she wrote the song for turq :' ) But at least she realized her mistake and is owing turq an apology!

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kindheart525 In reply to EdGeYbOiSs [2018-12-20 13:22:43 +0000 UTC]

I never said Mel was smart XD But at least she’s learned her lesson!

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EdGeYbOiSs In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:46:17 +0000 UTC]

I know XD finally XD

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Moonrose95 [2018-12-18 06:15:48 +0000 UTC]

I’m not crying... > : , (

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kindheart525 In reply to Moonrose95 [2018-12-20 13:30:34 +0000 UTC]

I’m sure a lot of my other stories have made you cry as well then XD

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Moonrose95 In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 15:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes lol
But the tears normally stay on the inside darn it

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Imaginationstudios43 In reply to Moonrose95 [2018-12-18 08:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow....her face sums it up 100%

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pillpuppies [2018-12-18 04:09:57 +0000 UTC]

honestly, i really hope you dont go down the road of turq and mel rekindling their love or something and getting back together, i really dont. staying friends though is fine. i just... i really like the idea that not all couples in a world full of love and friendship really last forever, and you're one of the very few next gen artists ive seen actually put a divorce between major characters and have it be so prominent in a story. i speak from experience as my parents are divorced as well, and i feel like itd be more of a personal and relatable story if they stayed separate, as most couples in real life after divorce tend to not get back together. but, thats just my personal opinion, im not going to waltz around and dictate where your story should go, because it is, in fact, your story! your art style is definitely coming to and youre definitely improving, in both art and writing. im glad i could be along for the ride as youve improved and grown. <3 <3 <3

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kindheart525 In reply to pillpuppies [2018-12-20 13:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah they’re definitely not getting back together. Mel’s already married to someone else who she loves very much, and Turq has do desire to get her heart broken again. They’ve been through too much to ever fall in love again. But they do need to at least make peace with each other, if not for themselves but for their children and grandchild.

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ArtisanHeart [2018-12-18 04:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Okay good Mel is learning. Hopefully she does make amends but i do not blame Turq if she doesn't let mel back in to her life so quick. My parents are divorced and well my mom is better off not staying at my dad's when we visit because he keeps thinking after she does stay that he has a chance with her and makes her uncomfortable 

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Twilyx360 [2018-12-18 03:55:16 +0000 UTC]

I know this has nothing to do with anything. But I’m just a sucker for old technology like VHS tapes XD. 

When do do you think the date was on that recording? (You don’t have to give an answer because we have no official way of measuring pony years)

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kindheart525 In reply to Twilyx360 [2018-12-20 13:34:28 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea, the Equestrian calendar works a lot different from ours. I will say it was made over 20 years before the events of this picture. 

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Shelbi-Cat [2018-12-18 03:47:05 +0000 UTC]

It's about time...Mel, I hope you learned your lesson about being so ignorant to your Ex

Btw, love how you did with this one

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kindheart525 In reply to Shelbi-Cat [2018-12-20 13:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, she’s definitely learned.

Thank you!

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Shelbi-Cat In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:25:03 +0000 UTC]

No prob

Can I still do a collab with you?
I did see your post when you asked about doing more collabs but I had internet issues back then but my internet is now fixed

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kindheart525 In reply to Shelbi-Cat [2018-12-20 13:40:26 +0000 UTC]

I don’t have anything to collab on right now, I got all the collaborators I needed, and I’m going on hiatus after Christmas so I won’t be working on anything for awhile 

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Shelbi-Cat In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 14:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay then
Can't wait to see what you got

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Annabear1211 [2018-12-18 03:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, 5is is deep, wonder how the next part will go

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kindheart525 In reply to Annabear1211 [2018-12-20 13:25:30 +0000 UTC]

How do you think it will go?

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Annabear1211 In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Or maybe she will end the engagement because she realized that her first lover is still her lover lol

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kindheart525 In reply to Annabear1211 [2018-12-20 13:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Mel and Cursive Quill have been married for over a year at this point; she loves him too much to call it off. She fell out of love with Turq long ago.

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Annabear1211 In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes that’s true, so yeah she go and say sorry about everything that has happened between them

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Annabear1211 In reply to kindheart525 [2018-12-20 13:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Hm well in all honestly, she wouldn’t end the engagement so maybe she’ll go and just apologize for never fixing the problem in the first time and maybe helping her to find somepony else?

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