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Published: 2012-09-25 22:53:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2425; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 16
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This is the first full page comic that I've ever done, it took me a while and I used photoshop for the colours. It would be great if some people could give me some feedback, thanks.Related content
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The sad part is this has happened before except the wife gave Peter a black eye.
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I kind of feel bad for laughing, yet regret nothing. Great work!
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Most important thing to say about this page- you finished it. Must people who aren't in the industry yet( including me) have a hard time finishing what they start. This says a lot about you. You commit to what you start and thats a big deal. I see a lot of cool ideas here, the perspective swing/kick in p4 is cool- especially with the lone knife in p3. You are not afraid of dynamic poses and it shows. There are some compositional things I did notice if you really do want feedback. IDK if this is just coincidence but it looks like you never include the woman's left hand or legs except through her silhouette on the last panel. Also, the thug guy is missing a set as well. It's tough sometimes to pick angles that magnify the stories intensity and give the reader new views of the action but it is far worth your research. To help me think of ideas I read a book called "Master Shots" it's for directors but you probably already are aware that that's basically what a comics artist is. Any way man, hope that helps. Like I said- mad respect for finishing what you started. I have no sequentials up yet except for the rough opening page of the comic I'm writing but I'm working on a 6 page story atm, your feedback would be great as well. Kudos to you man, you have my follow
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Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback JarelleDampier. It's the first full page I have done and wanted to test out some artistic ideas. I will definatley check out "Master shots" and think about adding drawings that show off the characters full bodies. Maybe if I did another page of this story you would of seen that, thanks.
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In an old spider-man comic book, spidey did learn that lesson when he intercepted diamond thieves... but since they had done nothign yet, they threw rocks at spider-man... guess he did unlearn that... XP
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Yeah the ol'parker luck always sticks with him. He has spider sense in the face of danger but no common sense in the face of people. Typical spidey.
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That'S why I love him, tho! They really say it on the cover: the greatest hero of all time! ^.^
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Sure, can you send it to me when your done because I would love to see it.
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i love it. really good work. nice designs, and humor was alright for a first outing.
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welcome just practice, 
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lol that's such a nice thing to say. I'm practicing my drawing at the moment as much as possible because I've got some good ideas for more stories.
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hahhaa funny one and yeaH I can see that happening to pete
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HA!
Could totally see that happening. Poor Pete. *facepalm*
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lol "brought a knife to a spider party" and how he owned an innocent person
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