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kingofthedededes73 — Legonia Manga V2 pg 1
Published: 2012-04-20 19:11:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 719; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 13
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NextFelt like revamping a couple page of my manga Legonia kingofthedededes73.deviantart.… Since most of the first half is outdated and badly done. So here i decided to revise a couple pages first, so i can be motivated to return to the original storyline. so far i made 2. this is the first, which unlike the original, gets rid of the big map of the 3 galaxies and gets rid of the crappy 2nd page battle cuts. and instead quickly fowards to an improved version of the 3rd page. so yea here's what it says
Narrator [lunea]: the Universe, a Vast Mass of stars and worlds. But its Galaxies are not in Peace.
A war of two Galactic Empires, raged over land & Galactic control. Ceased only by the dissappearance of one Princess.
For three years, this princess has left her home, travelling the galaxies, she has ad a lifetime of adventures and exploration.
But her greatest Adventure,
Is Just beginning
So yea comment and enjoy, ifya like these revisions, suggest me to continue it to at least the firt ten pages or the first battle.
All characters and manga belong to me
