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Nazoc [2016-10-07 19:34:16 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoy how snappy your stories are--they're wonderfully lewd and adorable at the same time, but you definitely don't the problem of being too verbose like I am. This is also written very competently on a technical level, however I do find your use of hyphens for italics/emphasis a little unusual. I think asterisks would suit better for that purpose.
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Nazoc In reply to kinkella [2016-10-14 21:09:45 +0000 UTC]
yeah that's how hyphens are used but I was actually referring to sentences like "Paul sat a -once again- crying Mary...". The hyphen looks weird there, I think I would write it as "Paul sat a (once again) crying Mary". You use hyphens when the extra information is a whole sentence like this line from one of my stories: " I a saw a lot of girls and women in high-chairs—well, since they were teenagers and young adults, the chairs were normal height, but with the trays and straps of a typical baby's high chair."
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JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-24 20:48:51 +0000 UTC]
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-26 11:01:10 +0000 UTC]
This isn't infantophilia, but rather infantalism. This seems awfully bizzare when you shame someone else's kink when you have no right to do so.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-26 13:19:49 +0000 UTC]
'Fetishist'? Really? Everyone that has a fetish is now called a fetishist? Okaaaay.
Where exactly does infantophilia show here? And you are insulting me when you're saying my story shows a sexual attraction to children.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-26 14:06:13 +0000 UTC]
So let me get this straight: First you comment on my story with "What the fudge?" then you say this story 'shows' infantophilia, and now you're telling me you enjoyed this story. So technically you disrespected me and said I have a sexual attraction towards children (why would I write a story that shows that if I don't?) but you like the story anyway.
I'm not going to educate you on the difference between a kink and a fetish since its not my place to do so, but I will tell you the difference 'infantalism' and 'infantophilia'. Infantalism is the desire to be a child, whereas Infantophilia is the desire to have sex with children. This story is about infatalism, NOT infantophilia.
I'm creeped out that you like this story when you think it's about infantophilia, please get off my profile if you have no clue about the AB/DL community or take part of it because this isn't your place, and I don't want to be accused for wanting to have sex with children by the likes of you.
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JSenpaiDaNinja In reply to kinkella [2016-04-26 14:49:46 +0000 UTC]
No no no, I just forgot the word. I apologize for that, I just forgot what the word was.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-26 15:26:39 +0000 UTC]
Fine, that [accusing me of being an infantophile] is forgotten. Regardless, your original comment was 'What the fudge?' and you think its 'awfully bizzare' when I 'drop my infantalism like that'. I don't see the respect in either comment, and they're both unsettling and offensive. Like I said earlier: If you aren't aware of the AB/DL community or take part of it, you shouldn't be reading or commenting on its stories. Actually, the fact that you have to substitute the F word with 'fudge' just shows you shouldn't be reading such stories. & this is a reply for your comments on my profile as well.
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JSenpaiDaNinja In reply to kinkella [2016-04-26 15:56:14 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't meaning any harm, and plus I'm not a fan of cussing.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-27 15:02:04 +0000 UTC]
Your first 2 comments are rude! How were you not meaning any harm from rude comments?
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JSenpaiDaNinja In reply to kinkella [2016-04-27 19:20:10 +0000 UTC]
I have moderate to severe Asperger's syndrome, so give me a break please.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-28 07:45:38 +0000 UTC]
That's not an excuse (and you also could be lying). The very least you can do is apologize.
Just get off my profile.
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JSenpaiDaNinja In reply to kinkella [2016-04-28 10:42:22 +0000 UTC]
I apologize and I will leave you alone, And I do have Asperger's syndrome, You might have it as well.
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kinkella In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-04-28 13:23:33 +0000 UTC]
Well then here's a tip; you have once again commented something rude. I'm sorry but I'm going to block you now, I don't have time for this nonsense.
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MissMattel [2016-04-05 20:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Ooh! Thank you very much! The characters were both written and portrayed well. The way Aliza and Mary acted were accurate. I'm excited to see more!
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