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Kimerasaurus [2012-02-13 18:56:44 +0000 UTC]
A very nice read if I do say so myself~. It's nice to see how Riley thinks and see a little more into his personality. Though I must admit, seeing a bitter Riley came somewhat as a surprise, but certainly not in a bad way.
I think this is a very good story, and not at all bad. The description was good and reading it was a pleasant way for me to spend time~.
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Kintanga In reply to Kimerasaurus [2012-02-20 05:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Awww, well you're too kind~
Thanks so much for stopping by and reading! QuQ
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HronawmonsTamer [2012-01-16 13:10:30 +0000 UTC]
...you know ever since I saw his app I did notice you didn't mention the way he entered the harmony... And now we know!
And boyyyyyyyy, I dunno if he is a genious or if he is totally MAD! And you know what I am reffering to! That's a STUPID thing to do and it got countless killed or in the hospital! So he was LUCKY! Luuuuuuuuuuuucky!
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Kintanga In reply to HronawmonsTamer [2012-01-17 04:42:06 +0000 UTC]
You can just say... he's personality is just totally weird. P: lol!
Oh yes, he is quite daring! >3 Though that may end up getting he's head
ripped off if he isn't ALOT more careful around Lavvy, ahaha!
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thoron67 [2012-01-14 05:26:59 +0000 UTC]
i really do love your writing, much better than mine, despite what you may say.
hyde is an... interesting fellow.
this was also a very good look into Riley's actual personality, i do know that if people hold their 'fake' long enough, that's what they eventually become.
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Kintanga In reply to thoron67 [2012-01-15 05:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Naww.. XD I feel it always lacks.
Because I can never really come up with ideas. : |
Yours at least have a goal and knows what it aiming for, ahah.
lol, thank you. P:
Yeah.. I figured coming from an abusive parent,
any child wouldn't really come out mentally 'sane'.
Though of course, thats not always the case.
But, the personality I gave Riley in he's ref felt
really off so I decided to go with it being the 'fake' him,
though I could also see it becoming who he really was eventually.
And if I ever get around to writting the past where he's dad
dies, it'll show and even darker side of Riley.
I think that's why I really enjoy Riley and Derek being friends
so much though. They came from rather similar backgrounds. And as
you put Derek also just wears a mask at times, tis interesting..
Anyways, thanks so much for reading! It means alot.
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thoron67 In reply to Kintanga [2012-01-15 06:06:24 +0000 UTC]
we are our worse critics, it is simply the curse of anyone who writes or draws or creates anything. a curse and often, a blessing; as we are always driven to do better and try harder.
yes, the abusive parent thing leaves deep scars, some physical some mental. nobody really gets out perfectly sane
it really does seem to fit him the best, slowly becoming the fake personality and allowing the old dark personality to slowly slip away. i like it
well, they are rather similiar in strange ways...
though derek wearing a mask at times is an understatement. he lives behind a mask and costume, that's why anpu exists. Anpu is still only half of who derek really is though, the rest of him is a weak and terrified little boy who is afraid of everyone, even Riley.
no need to thank me, i enjoy it
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sander94 [2012-01-14 00:48:53 +0000 UTC]
"those who does not strive for greatness deserves to"
your writing skills are great, stop doubting.
i dunno what to say about riley eventually becoming the mask he was willing to wear.
well, at least they he made it up with hyde ^^
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Kintanga In reply to sander94 [2012-01-15 23:16:22 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thanks. :')
But I just feel it lacks creativity..
Since I barely write stuff as it is. XD;;
Yeah. P:
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sander94 In reply to Kintanga [2012-01-21 21:29:28 +0000 UTC]
dont worry bout it XD
you are one of those people that write with quality.
few but good ;3
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Cannonfodder10503 [2012-01-13 22:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice intro, although i think he'd be better with a couch.
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Kintanga In reply to Cannonfodder10503 [2012-01-15 23:13:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. ^^ And lol, naw he loves that armchair.. P:
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Cannonfodder10503 In reply to Kintanga [2012-01-15 23:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Alright, but I'd get a couch anyway incase you get vistors.
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Truewolfwarriors [2012-01-13 15:48:55 +0000 UTC]
*cough cough* Oh dear god. What a great way to get caught by Lavvy...unbeliveable. Anyways, you're a really good writer, I don't know why you keep saying you aren't.
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Kintanga In reply to Truewolfwarriors [2012-01-15 23:15:02 +0000 UTC]
Yes. >3 He'd better learn to keep those hands away, or she WILL bute them off. XDDD
And Awww, thank you. ;u; I don't know.. I just feel it lacks creativity..
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Truewolfwarriors In reply to Kintanga [2012-01-21 08:21:27 +0000 UTC]
*headdesk* The reply to this never went though...sorry!!(I'm going to kill my mom's phone)
Its not lacking creatvity! I've been seeing pics of your old artwork, and scuh, and Meru sweetheart, you HAVE creativity running though your blood!
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