Theriona [2004-06-13 18:40:24 +0000 UTC]
Comments, comments. Hmmm....
The hair and clothing colors are working well (although you might need to add either make Katherine's hair darker/add highlights to it to make your lines on it visible) Like the mountain tone, too. As for the big chunk of forest? Maybe try adding areas of darker tone in it, to give it some more depth. My inking job on the leaves left a bit to be desired, but I didn't want to over-do what could be done better by tone or color. You could probably add an area of light tone to the bg of the forest (not the foreground trees, they have enough lines in them that they're already "dark", lol) to make the main chars stand out a bit more. Are you going to do any sky? It would be fun to see ^_____^ if you do.
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prin-chan [2004-06-12 21:12:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes, yes! Very nicely done! I Can't wait to see the rest of it!
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