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Published: 2012-08-26 16:22:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1003; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Another scene from a fanfic I'm probably never going to write. Edd has moved away, and Ed is very sad. Here's an "excerpt" of sorts:Ed stood, momentarily stunned, then exclaimed, "EDDY! YOU SPOKE MATH!"
"Yeah, I guess I did, huh? Boy, Sockhead would be proud, eh, Lumpy? ...oh no."
"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHH!!" Ed cried, sending a cascade of tears onto Eddy.
Wringing out his shirt, Eddy asked, "You gonna keep doing that?"
"But I miss him so MUCH, Eddy!" Ed blubbered.
"I know, I do too! But it's not like he's dead!"
Oh yeah, they're walking in the cul-de-sac on a sidewalk. SEE, I'M BAD AT THIS.
hb pencil and 3b pencil.
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Awww, poor Ed. He's missing his little Sock-head buddy.
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Daw poor Ed. 
You're good at writing them in character it sounds just like an episode.
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For a second there I thought the tears had eyes. XD
Also, I know this is your story, but I just thought of something I wanted to share with you.
What if Double-D comes back at the end and tells Ed and Eddy that he was only going away for a few days(or hours 
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Hee, that would be funny for a short story. But I've gone and thought up this long, complicated one and having him come back would totally ruin the point of the story.
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math is a very hard language to learn I am surprised at Eddy
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Aw, poor Ed and Eddy... both of them dealing with Edd's moving away in their own ways...
Good picture by the way, and you're not THAT bad at it. With a little improvement, you could probably write something great! You know, if you WANTED to...
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Thank you! Yeah, I want to write a decent fanfic, but I'm far too critical of my writing, to the point I barely write anything at all. I gotta work on that.
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I know how ya feel, I'm pretty critical of my own writing as well. But you just gotta take that first step, and then you'll (hopefully) find that other people like your writing just find.
I'll admit, the first time I got some constructive criticism on my writing I took it a bit hard, but I eventually learned to use such criticism to better my own writing.
But yeah, all it takes is practice!
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