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Jameee-Wolfeee [2017-07-10 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]
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Kisamelover12 In reply to Jameee-Wolfeee [2017-07-13 01:33:56 +0000 UTC]
MY anatomy isn't the best. And looks don't define a character's biological gender
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PeanutTheDestroyer1 [2017-07-08 22:02:29 +0000 UTC]
Nice start! Id suggest some anatomy videos, idk what program you use but some are harder then others, I use ibis paintx (kinda complicated but easy once your used to it) its an app for phone, if your on computer sorry im horrible with that ;-;
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Kisamelover12 In reply to PeanutTheDestroyer1 [2017-07-09 00:53:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I find it harder for me to draw with a mouse than an actual pencil. That kinda why I hide the hands in pockets. It's also is hard to good lines in the Paint app on my computer. Any specific areas to focus on? Any critiques on the OC itself?
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PeanutTheDestroyer1 In reply to Kisamelover12 [2017-07-09 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Agreed, a mouse is a lot harder then pencil 😂
And your Oc's arms bend in a sorta strange way, theres a guy on youtube called "Xabio arts" who does a lot on anatomy and clothing, hes not boring and has a lotta fun commentary, also its a CP OC right? The story could use some improvements (lotta killer stereotypes) but I did the same sorta thing, the more you write (and read) the better you get (mrcreepypasta on youtube reads stuff for you) besides that it looks like a good start, over time I guarantee working at it will make your character great! (Baptistonfire is not for the the faint of heart but does bring up a lot to avoid)
Besides that the only other thing is it's hard to tell shes a her, just more anatomy lessons and it'll be fine ^-^
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