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This is one of my ultimate favorite OC's. She is the baddest of the bad; nothing stands in her way. If you stepped a foot in her territory, trust me, she knew about it.

Kitana is the Queen of the Nagashi pride. She is the most vicious killing machine that ever stepped on God's green earth(in rp of course), and no one of the pride has dared to confront her. She is feared, she is hated, she is the ultimate damnation.

She may seem harmless now, but trust me. She is more than what she appears.

Kitana's body structure is very small. She is long, short and muscular. Kind of like a miniature horse on steroids; a common phrase I use for her. She has aggression issues, and is constantly at war with herself and with others who step in her way. She is known to kill her own young, just because they got in her way. She is heartless and cold blooded.

Favorite quote
With no claim, there is only bedlam. Beneath the world and all its flame,
there lies soot.
So who's to blame.


Short History Lesson
(Through her own words)

I was born of a Nagashi, and I will die like one. Something I promised myself long ago, before the mind lost all control. Sanity is just another way of keeping one calm, alive and at bay. But when you lose that, you are simply f r e e. I am a free soul. And I am the meaning of insanity. I am Kitana Nagashi

My life began in 1817, and ended in 1819. Two year after birth. Like all who were raised from scrub, I began my training to become a most feared Nagashi from the very day I could walk. My goal as a cub was to bite, scratch and kill anything that came into reach, if it was even possible at such a young age. For any normal cub, the possibility was in the fifties. But for a genetically divine monstrosity -- such as a young Nagashi cub, the odds were in their favor with another twenty percent. Strong odds for such small creatures of the night. But in away we were like Spartans.

Hard as marble, with tempers that flared and clashed boastfully. I was becoming one of them, slowly but surely. My years of training led me straight to the top; killing those who stood in my way, and even out of it. I starved myself of food; feeding only on the rules till my tongue swelled to sandpaper. I dripped with blood each and every day till my limbs went numb. And did I ever sleep? Not until I fell unwillingly.

I was a monster in training, losing my sanity little by little. Freeing my soul to the will of my father. And as I ate, breathed and slept with the rules of our pride, I gradually, graduated into a full pledged Nagashi. Though born a vampire, I was bitten for immortality; to stop the growth of my body and to remain as firm and swift as possible. I would remain this way for the remainder of my life. And because of my impressive output in training, I was assigned a strong role in the pride. From then on I was known as, The Punisher.

For many years after my triumph as a cub, I became a nightmare to the new scrubs. A terror to this pride. And a well respected Keeper of the Rules. To keep those in line, rumors spread of my horrible duties, and my heinous temper that shot down any tall, dark stranger. There was no room in this beast for talk, affection. Not even a glance was sufficient. I was a machine, meant to kill by the rules of our people. But all that was soon to change when my own father broke his own rule. It is not in my best interest to repeat his crimes, so lets just say, I freed my soul, and devoured his in the process.

Confused to his betrayal, I learned the others knew. And by law, this was punishable by death. Thus the end of the Nagashi`s rein. By my claws, my jaws, and the brute force of my being, I took down every single one of them. Ruthlessly.

But to my confusion I began to wander in hopes of clearing the air. Was I free, I wondered. Or was it all a lie. Was I free all along, only to be manipulated into a false reality? I wandered to the thoughts for years. Before stumbling aimlessly upon my future. Nephilim.

A journey through d e a t h.
© Brandy K. Doles - 11/03/2007 - 2011

Nagashi Rules

The Nagashi pride had very strict rules that were to be followed perfectly. Any who broke the law was to be punished by Kitana herself. These are the rules they had to follow.

P.S. These are not DA rules, these are just in character rules they had to keep and follow. Lol


1. If a rule is broken, The Punisher(Kitana) is sent to the one who broke said rule, and they are to be dealt with, or killed without forgiveness.

2. If a cub wanders away from the pride without an escort, and runs into one of the clan members. They have the right to kill or attack the cub to teach it a lesson.

3. If a clan member shows emotion(sadness, happiness, love, ect.) towards any lion/lioness outside of the clan, they are to be severely punished, tossed into the "room of despair" where they will be trained back into their heartless ways. Unless approved by the leader.

4. To show a clan member that you care for them, you must act a complete fool. Leaping around and nipping at the paws roughly is a sign of caring; friendship. If the words "I care for you" come out, their will be punishment. There is no room in the blackened heart for caring words.

5. To show love for a clan member, a harsh bite must be placed upon the shoulder in order for blood to be shed. After the wound is made, a caring tongue must clean the wound with a light purr durring. The words "I love you" shall never be uttered due to the darkness of the heart.

6. To get out of a relationship, the couple must fight to the death. The one standing alive will have the right to care for another. The one laying dead, will have his/her soul sent to the underworld of Nephilim.

NO ONE has permission to have a pride member. NO ONE has my permission to claim a Nagashi is or was ever theirs. They are copywritten to me. Please respect my boundaries.

Character Design/Storyline/Rules/everything © Brandy K. Doles. - ~Kitana000 2004-2011


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Comments: 31

Chaotic--Edge [2011-09-12 22:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh.. It's a little dark. D: Do you have more pictures of her?

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Kitana000 In reply to Chaotic--Edge [2011-09-12 22:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Sadly no, this is my only picture of her. >w<;
She is all black; pitch black. And she has gold markings going up her body.
If you'd like, I can try and lighten the picture for you?

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Chaotic--Edge In reply to Kitana000 [2011-09-12 22:21:12 +0000 UTC]

No that's fine, details will be okay. I'll ask if I need anymore details. ^^ thanks.

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Kitana000 In reply to Chaotic--Edge [2011-09-12 22:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Ok, if you need to save the pic and lighten it you can. =O Her colors are black gold and red. ^-^ Thanks again

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Chaotic--Edge In reply to Kitana000 [2011-09-12 23:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Are all the gold markings symmetrical? 0.0

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Kitana000 In reply to Chaotic--Edge [2011-09-12 23:24:19 +0000 UTC]

I believe so, yes. I might be able to find more pictures if it will help?
Here is one of Nala from TLK I colored over.
[link]

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Chaotic--Edge In reply to Kitana000 [2011-09-12 23:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Alright, I'm finished. c: You know the drill, pay me and I'll post.

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Kitana000 In reply to Chaotic--Edge [2011-09-12 23:48:15 +0000 UTC]

I paid! <333

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Chaotic--Edge In reply to Kitana000 [2011-09-12 23:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I posted

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sindos [2011-04-22 08:19:55 +0000 UTC]

The shadow… I love that you dropped a shadow… it makes it more mysterious.
Thanks for showing me! *favs*

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Kitana000 In reply to sindos [2011-04-22 08:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you like the shadow idea. I thought it made the ref sheet more original by having a shadow behind each character.
I mainly did it for height differences.
xD
<333

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sindos In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-22 08:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I don't think I see shadows often on ref sheets.
^_^

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TheMiles [2011-04-21 14:15:21 +0000 UTC]

"Sanity is just another way of keeping one calm, alive and at bay. But when you lose that, you are simply f r e e. I am a free soul."
I love this quote so much. Just.. so totally. Nice to see the OC your name comes from~

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Kitana000 In reply to TheMiles [2011-04-21 20:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Lol Yes, well actually I have 2 Kitana OC's. The first OC Kitana is humanoid. she is a Neko in a Book I'm actually writing. =]
This Kitana is my bad side. She is everything you don't want to see within me because, she is a total monster.

BUT all my greatest quotes and my greatest writing comes out with this character.
I'm glad you like that quote.
What do you think of the other quote?
The Bedlem one.

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TheMiles In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-22 07:28:34 +0000 UTC]

<_< .... >_> .....

I'm honest, I don't understand half of the words of that quote. I need to work on my english. I'll try to get it. D: Sorry

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Kitana000 In reply to TheMiles [2011-04-22 08:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah xD Pretty much it means, there has to be a leader in a world of chaos. >>

"With no claim, there is only bedlam"
Meaning, he who does not lead, renders the world to chaos.

"Beneath the world and all its flame, there lies soot."
Meaning, without said leader, the heat of our differences will ruin the world we live in."

"So who's to blame"
Im sure you get it from this.
xD

Do you get it now?
>o>

I love making quotes.

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TheMiles In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-22 08:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, it makes sense now! And I learned something too X3 Great quote~

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Kitana000 In reply to TheMiles [2011-04-22 08:53:31 +0000 UTC]

Lol yesh. I tend to make things sound really difficul. I'll try not writing my comic like that xD <333

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Maphein [2011-04-21 13:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool all the characters!!

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Kitana000 In reply to Maphein [2011-04-21 20:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Im glad you like them.
Im surprised so many like them. @~@ Shocked really <333

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Searii [2011-04-21 11:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Ohh very very Nice >w< - ish a fan allready-

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Kitana000 In reply to Searii [2011-04-21 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Yesh! I'm glad you like them. <33
These are the characters I am afraid would get stolen. ;~;
These; just like shimree, are my original designs and original characters from 2007. WELL actually 2004(from within my mind).
I love them, and I'd lose it if I lost them >O<

I have more coming today. Makes and whatnot
You're gunna love them! <33

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Searii In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-21 20:10:52 +0000 UTC]

I Hope not. I'll probably like yours more anyway!! Haha. Can't wait >w<

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Kitana000 In reply to Searii [2011-04-21 20:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeeesh! xD Mine rule! For realz<3

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SacredDamnation [2011-04-21 08:47:11 +0000 UTC]

If Shim didnt adopt Apo I secertly wanted Kitana too.....Apo had a crush on her....like an admiration from a far xD

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Kitana000 In reply to SacredDamnation [2011-04-21 08:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Really? xD I didn't know that. Though Kitana did enjoy Apo's odd company.. But she would have eaten him alive. @~@
Kitana is highly agg.......... WE SHOULD RP
I wanna see what Ragnarok does with her >x>
Or a character of yours.
ZOMG

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SacredDamnation In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-21 09:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Shimree and Kitana were the only two lioness he actually wanted to be part of their family. lol
O.O I can use my fu dog :3
Im making refs after work today.

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Kitana000 In reply to SacredDamnation [2011-04-21 09:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Yay that would be fun ^-^

Hittin the hay; I haven't slept.
We need to talk later.
I have something I wanna tell you but not right now.
=]
Love you, night night

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SacredDamnation In reply to Kitana000 [2011-04-21 09:19:19 +0000 UTC]

okay Nu night<3
Love ya<33

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Mask-TheDisguise [2011-04-21 08:10:29 +0000 UTC]

love the rules and remember them<3 so creative.

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Kitana000 In reply to Mask-TheDisguise [2011-04-21 08:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Yeah the rules were bad ass. >o> I think that's what made people so interested in the Nagashi pride. About how strict and aggressive they were lol.

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