sumilidon [2004-07-16 23:22:15 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, very cute, though it's a bit badly scanned. it's somewhat unclear. I agree with provo on everything else
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Provolvere [2004-07-16 22:04:36 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you experimented with the hand, changing it from a fist to a relaxed position. You could have left that out of the scan and just kept the character, but it adds a nice touch.
Once comment i have about this piece in general is that it is hard to see the detail in some places because the pencil marks are lighter in areas where you spent less time on. This often is especially noticeable when you go to scan the piece. One suggestion would be to consider inking and finalizing your pieces, where another option would be just to play with the contrast of the scanned piece to make the light parts a bit darker. Just some food for thought.
Overall, I really like this character you have put together. She has a cool outfit, and you can tell she is female without her being too buxom. Her face is a bit bland, though, as it's really just a cartoony set of eyes, a line mouth, and a simple button nose at the moment. Besides these minor points, I still really like the piece and the progress I've been seeing in your work. Keep posting!
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