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Published: 2005-07-21 09:29:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1964; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 170
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Just another TT fanart pic. It's the titans just hanging out and spending quality time together. I'm such a dork. ^_^ This is supposed to be my version of the last scene of the show's final episode, right before the credits. They just won a difficult battle, and now they're just sitting around being all chummy. Yes, I decided to put Terra in. I don't care how much you hate her, keep it to yourself.
I'm really trying to improve my digital art, and this is the latest piece that came out of my struggle. I had to redo it three times because the evil program kept screwing up repeatedly. So, I would appreciate it if you heed the call of the green check mark and tell me what I could improve on for future art. I already know that the edges are a little rough, so things other than that would be really helpful.
Tools: mechanical pencil, sharpie, the evil ArcSoft PhotoStudio
EDIT: Fixed some blurriness issues with Star, Robin, Terra, and Cy, fixed the shine on Cy's squares, neatened up the background around Robin and Raven, lightened Raven's skin tone, added some ajustments to her cloak (adding in behind her arm where I had couch before
), brightened the colors slightly, did some small work on the shadows.
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Comments: 12
Keep trying- I'm sure you'll only get better! ^^
Raven's skin colour is too grey, and Starfire and Robin look a little bit blurred. x__X ;; I only noticed one part where the light source was weird; the square on Cyborg's chest- it's lighter on the left, but on his lower body you see the light is hitting the right side.
I hope this critique helps.
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Thank you so much for the help!
I guess I'll try to edit this picutre, despite my current laziness
Thanks again!
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Thst's really cool. The ending should happen that way!
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Lol, I think it's cool!
They all look so happy...That's how it should have ended up, huh?
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Awwws... You added on to that Cyborg pic... Very cute!
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Woo hoo, call of the green checkmark! This is clearly an improvement over your past works; your effort shows! Only a few things to critique.
First thing, you made a miniscule, but cute mistake; the space between Raven's arm and her body should be colored white, because of her cloak. Hehe.
Second thing... I can't really identify the source of light. Maybe from the front, like a camera flash? I know it's difficult, and I'm kind of being a hypocrite by saying this, but try to keep your shading consistent. And I don't know if it's shadows on Robin and Starfire, but they look a bit smudgy...
One last thing; I know most artists just jump right into a picture with hardly any pre-conception. Sometimes this works, but usually things end up out of proportion. I see that you already had an idea of what this was going to look like in the end, and that's a good thing. But their heads are all varying slightly in size. I know it's annoying, but sketch basic shapes in the beginning, like circles. It helps to keep everything equal.
Again, not a very good critique, but it's early.
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