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(somewhere in ch. 21)... (And the end of Book one!!!!)

But, the blood in her veins went cold when she saw Damion carrying Rook. He was covered in blood and littered with cuts and abrasions. When he raised his head, she saw the twin black eyes and blood coming from his nose and mouth. 

 

She quickly tried to reach him through the thick snow. “Damion?!” she screams his name at the top of her lungs when he begins to fall. Tears ran down her face as she sprinted and tripped through the snow in a desperate attempt to reach them. 

 

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The demon had at last made it up the hill. Only then, did he relinquish his hold on his heavy scythe at the gate while walking up the path to his mansion. ‘So close, yet, so far away,’ he thought as his legs continue to take him to his goal. Rook had hardly stirred in his hold. He was too quiet and still, making Damion's stomach drop as he continued forward. Muffled sounds of barks entered his hearing. He realized it was Ruby as she circled them, then, walked alongside him. Sweat broke out on his skin as his vision began to swim. 

 

He heard another voice and instantly recognized the warm sound. ‘Sophie.’ His steps faltered as he desperately looked up to try and see her, but only saw a blurry vision of blues and gold’s. He tried to reach out to her. “Sophie,” he rasped before his vision completely blackened and he began to fall to the ground. 

 

All he could feel was the bone chilling cold that seeped through his flesh as if the Dark Lord himself had a grip on his soul and was dragging him down to the underworld. 

 

His dark world was nothing more than muffled noises, touches, and scents as something turned him to his back and shifted his head to lay on something soft that held the strong scent of lilacs and vanilla. Something hot and wet fell upon his cold, bloody face as watery sounds echoed in his head. He tried to open his heavy eyes, but was too tired and weak to even speak and only fell further into unconsciousness. 

 

‘Is this the end?’ 

 

To be continued… 

Book two: Retaliation 


WANNA KNOW WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS NOW?! HERE IS A LINK TO THE E-BOOK VERSION YOU CAN BUY ON AMAZON!  Plus the comments here can give you a pretty good idea what the rest of the fans think ^W^ THIS IS THE END OF BOOK ONE, BUT THIS IS DEFINITELY NOT THE END AS WE CONTINUE WITH BOOK TWO: RETALIATION!!! (which is a rough draft/ WIP you can read here until it is edited/completed and ready for amazon.)


www.amazon.com/dp/B01KSJ6S5I#n…


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Comments: 228

kitsunefire7 In reply to ??? [2015-11-07 02:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Really?!

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RoseFlameBurns In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-11-07 02:27:06 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!! But that means you are so good! I CANT STOP READING!!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to RoseFlameBurns [2015-11-07 02:34:23 +0000 UTC]

XD lol thats too bad, cause you'll soon reach the ch. where you have to wait for me to update bit by bit. >,<

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RoseFlameBurns In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-11-07 02:38:59 +0000 UTC]

CRAP!! Well then I guess I will have to be patient!! oh no... im not good at that!! XD!! Well I guess while I wait I can write my story!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to RoseFlameBurns [2015-11-07 03:03:14 +0000 UTC]

yay!

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Wondermoon [2015-09-14 21:54:47 +0000 UTC]

probably

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Wondermoon [2015-09-14 22:09:33 +0000 UTC]

XD lol the answer is in the next book

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Wondermoon In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-09-14 22:43:46 +0000 UTC]

x3

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loneywolf555 [2015-05-09 09:29:07 +0000 UTC]

:I

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Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-25 18:36:16 +0000 UTC]

  awesome..

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 17:02:19 +0000 UTC]

XD lol its so awesome that you fall over.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 17:02:16 +0000 UTC]

XD lol its so awesome that you fall over.

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Eyes-of-Inferno In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-26 17:34:12 +0000 UTC]

lol it was just awesome lol

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 17:38:06 +0000 UTC]

X3

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Eyes-of-Inferno In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-26 17:46:44 +0000 UTC]

 *last words* "finish the cliffhanger.." ...*falls asleep*

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 17:49:45 +0000 UTC]

XD lol I started on book 2 update! XD go look!

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Eyes-of-Inferno In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-26 18:04:32 +0000 UTC]

 *fly over to read*

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 18:57:00 +0000 UTC]

XD lol u goof!

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Eyes-of-Inferno In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-26 19:00:54 +0000 UTC]

well why would I walk?    lol  

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Eyes-of-Inferno [2014-05-26 17:38:04 +0000 UTC]

X3

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epona51 [2014-05-22 04:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhhhh! Such a cliffhanger!  I can't wait for book 2 to come out.

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AJInu-Okami [2014-05-19 04:17:43 +0000 UTC]

Goddamn cliffhanger! Although, that means the other soul collectors will appear soon. Also, more smex! XD

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kitsunefire7 In reply to AJInu-Okami [2014-05-19 04:18:33 +0000 UTC]

X3 hehe yesh~ there shall be more smex! >D

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AJInu-Okami In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-19 05:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Woot!

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onegiantdinosaur [2014-05-18 18:14:35 +0000 UTC]

:0 Oh nooo! Not another cliffhanger. ._.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to onegiantdinosaur [2014-05-18 23:36:08 +0000 UTC]

>D muwahaha! yesh! another cliffhanger!

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Moon-chan332 [2014-05-18 06:21:45 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO!!!! CLIFF HANGER!!!!!TT^TT

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Moon-chan332 [2014-05-18 13:19:30 +0000 UTC]

XD lol YESSSSSSSSSSS Cliffhanger! that way people HAVE to get the next book to know what happens!!!

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Moon-chan332 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 20:28:41 +0000 UTC]

cant wait!!!!

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Tigerpaws59 [2014-05-18 06:21:36 +0000 UTC]

As always you have taken us on another journey & a rather sad ending to this stage..  so looking forward to more & some happiness for both Damion & Sophie, please! Thanks again too.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Tigerpaws59 [2014-05-18 13:20:12 +0000 UTC]

^U^ Ty! Dont you worry! There will be an interesting turn of events for these two. >3

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bloodking30 [2014-05-18 05:23:09 +0000 UTC]

bad kitty  demon smiled

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kitsunefire7 In reply to bloodking30 [2014-05-18 13:20:55 +0000 UTC]

0,o yeah he did. 

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bloodking30 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 14:48:01 +0000 UTC]

haahaa

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spygirlLeah [2014-05-18 04:05:52 +0000 UTC]

that... was so... AMAZING!!! i hope does good it's a really great book , EEEEHH!! i can't  wait for the next book!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to spygirlLeah [2014-05-18 04:23:30 +0000 UTC]

bows~ ty ty I will try and get to the second book soon.

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WolfSpirit1292 [2014-05-18 03:28:59 +0000 UTC]

What a great powerful tragic ending!! i'm anxious to read the second book!  
I definitely would like to buy the book once you get it published!  

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kitsunefire7 In reply to WolfSpirit1292 [2014-05-18 03:34:47 +0000 UTC]

YAY X3 thats great to know! I will let u all know asap if I'm successful in publishing this.

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MantiisShrimp [2014-05-18 03:23:07 +0000 UTC]

It NEEDS to be in print I WILL be buying it! QAQ

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kitsunefire7 In reply to MantiisShrimp [2014-05-18 03:24:50 +0000 UTC]

X3 yay! should it have the (updated) pictures or not? and what did u think of the ending? ^^

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MantiisShrimp In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 03:30:31 +0000 UTC]

You're asking if the book should have the updated chapter pictures, right? If yes, then I say yes. You can use them to start of each chapter or end them.
I desperately need the next book, I have to know what happens next.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to MantiisShrimp [2014-05-18 03:34:00 +0000 UTC]

good to know ^U^ I will update the other pic. of the ch.s that just need a little improvement while others (like ch. one) will be replaced all together. 

And for the second book I will try and get started on it soon ^U^ but that means hopefully that for people who dont read this on DA and find this in a paper book will be like you and cannot wait for the next book.

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MantiisShrimp In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 03:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

I'm looking forward to it, and I think they will. You're writing tugs at the feels so you might get a lot of people hooked.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to MantiisShrimp [2014-05-18 03:50:00 +0000 UTC]

I hope so ^U^ I just hope there aren't too many people out there that would find it wrong to read about 'demons' and romance~ Thats my only concern.

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MantiisShrimp In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 03:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I think it'll be fine. People are cool with vampires, werewolves and zombies having romance with humans, why should demons be in a different category?
Personally I use the term "demon" loosely to encompass any supernatural being :T

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kitsunefire7 In reply to MantiisShrimp [2014-05-18 04:04:09 +0000 UTC]

you make some great points ^^ thank you for encouraging me.

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MantiisShrimp In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-18 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I can do so, I really do want to see your book in print *-*

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rayvin734 [2014-05-12 01:14:08 +0000 UTC]

oh no..  this has me feeling legitimately upset.. the feels!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to rayvin734 [2014-05-12 01:37:06 +0000 UTC]

XD lol u dont know what will happen, but u will...soon  =w=

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rayvin734 In reply to kitsunefire7 [2014-05-12 02:08:38 +0000 UTC]

awww, please be good...

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