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Published: 2012-11-03 06:29:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 6052; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 27
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(Somewhere in Chapter 2)...

He raised an eyebrow and grumbled, “What?” 

 

“Wanna talk about what’s bothering you?” she asked with concern in her eyes. 

 

He narrowed his eyes at her, “And what makes you think something’s bothering me?” 

 

She didn't shy away from his glare. “You just look like a lot happened tonight. If you don’t wanna talk that’s fine. Just know that I’m here for you, Damion,” she said in a soft voice as she sat, patiently, next to him. 

 

Those words warmed his chest as he bent over to put his elbows on his knees, while he kept taking deep breaths. Sophie must have felt his stress increase and decided to cautiously scoot closer to him, and began to gently thread her fingers through his thick black hair, sometimes touching the tip of his pointed, pierced ears as she waited to see if he would talk. Damion relished the feel of her small fingers in his hair. Oh how it smoothed his inner turmoil as he began to talk about the events that happened tonight. When he finished, he didn’t expect to be encased in loving arms as tears started to fall onto his cheek. Looking up he saw Sophie crying as she held him close. 

 

“Oh Damion, I’m so sorry.” 

 

“... Why do you apologize? I am just a heartless bastard.” His eyes furrowed as he tried to understand why she was upset. 

 

"Don't call yourself that!" 

 

"No, Sophie," he interrupted as he firmly pressed her hand against his hollow chest. He saw the realization in her rounding eyes as she understood. "This is what I will always be." 

 

“Don’t you dare say that, Damion! You’re good and I know it!” 

 

His brows furrowed more at her claim, “Why does it matter to you?” 

 

Her eyes held a sliver of hurt for a moment before they filled with kindness again. “Isn’t it obvious? I’m your friend.” She gently threaded her free hand through his long bangs to show more of his face. 

 

The demon’s head tilted slightly as he tried to understand the unfamiliar word, “Friend?” 

 

She nodded her head at his question, “Yes. Even though I’ve only been here for week, I would like to think that we are friends. I’ve seen so many different sides to you Damion and it breaks my heart when people treat you like a monster, when you’re not.” Another tear fell from her cheek and landed on his. “Haven’t you ever had someone to call your friend?” 

 

He blinked slowly, as he searched his memories, before looking up at her with intense eyes, “Never.” His voice was so hollow when he answered; like a broken soul. 

 

His answer made Sophie’s eyes water more. Her lips pressed together as she tried to keep herself from sobbing on him. He didn’t need that. But, what he did need, she gave with a heart-warming smile, “Well, you do now. And I’m glad to have a friend like you in my life.” She leaned in again as she put everything she had into her hug, showing Damion that there was someone that cared about him. 


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Comments: 92

kitsunefire7 In reply to ??? [2016-08-06 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]

This is a different world then are's is, and set back into the older times, like 1800's. In this series, everyone fears the soul collectors and soul eaters, its what they grew up with and is indeed their norm. BUT when this series is over, things will change. After this big change happens, soul collectors/ eaters will be nothing but a scary story to tell children, then when we get to our modern day, they wont be known at all. Accept maybe mythology books. By this time, soul collectors will be able to hide among the humans with more ease when slaying soul eaters. And soul eaters will have changed, evolve, and adapted over the centuries to survive. (creatures like vampires, werewolves, and other creatures will also come into play.) 

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jolliapplegirl In reply to kitsunefire7 [2016-08-06 02:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Really? I didn't realize this was taking place in some olden times, though it would explain why Sophie was sent to her aunt and uncles place after her parents died. Thats not something we generally do now without some in between. I will take that into context and I look forward to further readings since this story looks fun but filled with feels.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to jolliapplegirl [2016-08-06 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want to say a time, so I added details in the story. Such as their no technology, their things like candles, old cast iron stove, no cars, etc. But then again, all that detail is in the final version lol. So its much clearer whats going on around them.

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Neightingale [2015-11-01 20:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I think it's great how he had met her before and then met her again, but I'm thinking that when he tells her that she would forgive him... I hope that I am right with my assumption?

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Neightingale [2015-11-01 20:24:49 +0000 UTC]

You'll find out o,o

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Neightingale In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-11-01 20:40:23 +0000 UTC]

-squees quietly- I must read on! XD

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Neightingale [2015-11-01 21:26:39 +0000 UTC]

do it!!!! O,O XD

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Neightingale In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-11-01 22:19:14 +0000 UTC]

IAM DOIN IT!!!!! OvO xD

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shadowknight445 [2014-04-23 03:29:48 +0000 UTC]

I almost can't stop reading

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marximonto [2013-07-29 14:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Can I see Sophie's Photograph? 

I know many people are always asking draw this draw that, I don't wanna bother you if you are very busy. but maybe if you have nothing to do....


but if don't want or cant please don't feel obligated.

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marximonto In reply to marximonto [2013-07-29 15:56:57 +0000 UTC]

p.s: when you said take her nephews soul, you mean cousin right ?.



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kitsunefire7 In reply to marximonto [2013-07-29 14:56:34 +0000 UTC]

So you want me to draw Sophie? If so what do you want her to be doing?

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marximonto In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-07-29 16:00:29 +0000 UTC]

No, not Sophie but the photograph of her family the one she thought Damion burn, when he burn her old dress

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kitsunefire7 In reply to marximonto [2013-07-29 17:01:11 +0000 UTC]

hmm i didn't think about that...I'll have to give it a try. ^^

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General-Kool-Aid [2013-03-28 23:13:20 +0000 UTC]

I like this illustration, seeing people in pain ALWAYS makes me happy. 8)

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kitsunefire7 In reply to General-Kool-Aid [2013-03-28 23:28:38 +0000 UTC]

that dont surprise me XD

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General-Kool-Aid In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-03-28 23:57:11 +0000 UTC]

HEY!! What's that supposed to mean?

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kitsunefire7 In reply to General-Kool-Aid [2013-03-28 23:58:06 +0000 UTC]

that you are who you are~

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General-Kool-Aid In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-03-29 00:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay. I forgive you then. LOL...XD

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FeatheringAngel [2013-03-24 09:01:48 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, it's Hidden Love!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to FeatheringAngel [2013-03-24 15:12:25 +0000 UTC]

^U^ yep

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FeatheringAngel In reply to FeatheringAngel [2013-03-24 09:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice twist about how he found out that he took sophie's parents and it was somewhat his fault for putting her in life like that.

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General-Kool-Aid [2013-02-13 23:56:53 +0000 UTC]

ONLY ONE DEATH!?, Oh well I guess you can't give all the gore at once or it would ruin the storyline...It's an odd story, not really my kind of thing but oddly Damion reminds me of, well me except I'm not as soft toward anyone as he is toward Sophie...but it's kind of like that with my daughter and wife to a certain extent...EDIT! EDIT! EDIT! Sorry I have a pet peeve toward misspellings, grammar, etc. BUT I can't bitch, you are not trying to make it a technical novel so...either way GOOD JOB!!

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kitsunefire7 In reply to General-Kool-Aid [2013-02-14 01:30:33 +0000 UTC]

ty ^U^ but I got an editor o_o I wonder what else needs fixing. and Damions only nice to Sophie, anyone else and they screwed XD

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General-Kool-Aid In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-02-14 23:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Okay...

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AJInu-Okami [2012-11-11 23:36:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome X3

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VonDiezyl [2012-11-07 03:04:32 +0000 UTC]

OuO I LOVE THIS STORY!!! MORE MORE

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kitsunefire7 In reply to VonDiezyl [2012-11-07 03:05:09 +0000 UTC]

X3 did u read the others in the features folder?

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VonDiezyl In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-07 21:51:56 +0000 UTC]

I did!! I love the story, and the artwork is just beautiful too :heart I hope there's more to read soon

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kitsunefire7 In reply to VonDiezyl [2012-11-07 22:12:08 +0000 UTC]

dont worry, their will be more in the future ^^

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VonDiezyl In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-07 23:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Yay sounds good

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Yanaaa-Chan [2012-11-06 22:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Nevermind I'm stupid >.< I read out of order

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Yanaaa-Chan [2012-11-06 22:58:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm so confused, in the last one he knew that she was that baby already?

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Yanaaa-Chan [2012-11-06 23:32:55 +0000 UTC]

yeah sorry about that ^^' theirs still two more ch.s i have to type before they got to that part of the story. I was just so worked up on that ch. that i typed ahead:afraid i was going to lose that spark i get from inspiration, but now im going to keep int in order after i finish the next 2 and then it will be in order from there on

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AJInu-Okami [2012-11-06 06:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Finally! Now I can edit this amazing story! XD

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kitsunefire7 In reply to AJInu-Okami [2012-11-06 06:22:08 +0000 UTC]

yay ^U^ what do u think? whats your favorite part now that the whole ch. is done?

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AJInu-Okami In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-06 06:36:07 +0000 UTC]

I like everything (especially Damion's thoughts on Sophie's skin X3). I can see you doing well on this I will get to editing this in the morning.
You mixing your words 'soap' and 'soup' is ticking me off XD

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kitsunefire7 In reply to AJInu-Okami [2012-11-06 06:41:45 +0000 UTC]

hehe X3 of course you like the woot woot moment XD and im glad you think so ^^ and sorry, i was sick/sleepy when i typed the word soap wrong XD

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AJInu-Okami In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-06 07:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Lol!
Oh, I see.

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TokeneiUzumaki [2012-11-04 16:45:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the hole thang I want more!!!! And the demon Sonds like he has a huge crush on her!!! I like the demon hes kinda cute!!! Nice job luv !!!!!<3

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kitsunefire7 In reply to TokeneiUzumaki [2012-11-04 16:47:57 +0000 UTC]

hehe X3 whell he starts to develop feelings for her and realizes later on that he loves her ^^ and YES he is cute X3 if you wanna read more on these two, just go to me features folder ^^

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TokeneiUzumaki In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-04 17:02:50 +0000 UTC]

I still like the hole idea about a humen and a demon nice job!!!! Still want more though

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kitsunefire7 In reply to TokeneiUzumaki [2012-11-04 17:09:12 +0000 UTC]

X3 their will be more soon. i'll type you when i finish this story

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TokeneiUzumaki In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-04 17:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Yay thank u luv it's good so far yay

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kitsunefire7 In reply to TokeneiUzumaki [2012-11-06 06:27:46 +0000 UTC]

its DONE XD enjoy!

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TokeneiUzumaki In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-07 22:51:59 +0000 UTC]

k thank u !!!!!!!!!!!

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Cptn-Quint [2012-11-04 16:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Well so far so good, it was rather enjoyable.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Cptn-Quint [2012-11-04 16:39:40 +0000 UTC]

what was your favorite part so far ^^ ?

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Cptn-Quint In reply to kitsunefire7 [2012-11-04 17:30:13 +0000 UTC]

That's a tough one... the parts were Damion was being an ass were humorous, mainly the funnier bits were the ones that stood out to me, but again everything else was good just didn't stand out quite as much.

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kitsunefire7 In reply to Cptn-Quint [2012-11-06 06:28:09 +0000 UTC]

its done!!!

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