Comments: 19
PepsiSlushie [2012-07-07 22:25:45 +0000 UTC]
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! IM ADDICTED!
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Simonox [2012-02-02 17:14:13 +0000 UTC]
I love it! Pleas continue. It has so much potential.
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Fellmoon [2011-08-31 13:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Very nice and funny, I like how you seem to at least suggest FLuttershy might start to like a colt in future 'episodes'.
Though again, the only male character in this fanfiction is shown in a negitive like. Rude, insulting, perverted, troublemaker... why did you show Spike that way?
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KitsuneRuri In reply to Fellmoon [2011-09-01 01:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment about the humor. I intend to keep it going, and it's only going to get more ridiculous.
Lol, you're going to be disappointed when you find out who the "Masked Man" actually is.
With regard to Spike, I actually didn't mean to protray him negatively, to be honest. He's the typical anime "bad boy" that straight girls seem to go nuts over. Remember, this is set in a stage where characters have anime traits. And Rainbow Dash also points out that Spike is "going through a phase." It's mainly because he's actually around other dragons his age for once. When he meets the right girl dragon, he's gonna revert back to the shy kid from the original show, and I intend to make their romance cute.
By the way, you may have noticed there's a "gap" here...I had originally written a battle scene and ending to the episode, but I accidentally deleted the whole episode and haven't gotten around to re-writing the battle scene yet. When I do -- you'll see that the "bad guy" is actually just a protective older brother. When he's defeated, all he cares about is his little sister, the one Spike was hitting on. So I would encourage you to reread this when I get around to completing it; the "bad guy" is actually a male shown in a positive light. He's defeated by Fluttershy's "Shoujo Ai Beam," which doesn't hurt him, it just calms him and transforms him back into a normal teenage dragon. I'll note you when I get around to finishing this episode.
~Ruri
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Wise-Idiot [2011-07-19 00:19:21 +0000 UTC]
I...what...what is this!? AND WHY AM I COMPELLED TO CONTINUE READING!? AUGH!
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KitsuneRuri In reply to Wise-Idiot [2011-07-22 01:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Haha. This is My Little Magical Ponygirl! >D I really do need to get back to this series, though. Thanks for commenting and reminding me.
~Ruri
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KitsuneRuri In reply to Gorgeous-Rarity [2011-06-14 20:26:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. ^^ I really need to get back to work on restoring this to its completed state.
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KitsuneRuri In reply to Buttersc0tchSundae [2011-06-09 12:31:32 +0000 UTC]
xD Glad you like it so far.
It will only get more ludicrous and scandalous as it goes on! Stay tuned!
~Ruri
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dwreanpony [2011-06-06 23:26:05 +0000 UTC]
hmm, apparently, cartoon antics change from place to place in equestria.
if pinkie gets a black cartoon cat with wierd eyes that pops up in odd places... no wait... thats rarity... continue... then im going to lol.
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KitsuneRuri In reply to dwreanpony [2011-06-07 00:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're going to lol alright. Just wait till you see what I have in store for Derpy Hooves! xD (You didn't really think I'd leave her out just because she's not one of the Elements of Harmony, did you? :3)
~Ruri
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dwreanpony In reply to KitsuneRuri [2011-06-11 00:02:07 +0000 UTC]
that dragon should be ashamed of himself! go back to dragon school and learn how to fight!
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KitsuneRuri In reply to dwreanpony [2011-06-11 00:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Haha. xD He is a teenager! He had just transformed into a larger form. Technically, he will be going back to dragon school. :3
~Ruri
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dwreanpony In reply to KitsuneRuri [2011-06-11 01:27:02 +0000 UTC]
good. maybe someone will go from wyrm to dragon off screen!
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Paprika1 [2011-06-06 01:44:22 +0000 UTC]
I'll whach for more
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