mickeythewicked [2012-01-06 03:58:06 +0000 UTC]
very sweet! However, I'd like to give you some advice on the horizon line. Thinking of the horizon line as the eye level will help a bunch in placing it correctly. It looks as though the viewer is looking at the figures straight-on, probably at the same eye level as the figures depicted. However, the horizon line is way at the top of the page! A high horizon = a high eye level. If we are at a high eye level, then we would be looking at the figures from above. For this piece, if would be more appropriate to place the horizon a lot lower. I hope this helps! Keep up the great work and best of luck.
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