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KittiRawr — need some critique / opinions
Published: 2013-07-02 01:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 469; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 1
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... on the pose in general.If you think it's good, then... great :'D
Please let me know what you think about things like ... does the legs look awkward, does the pose look too stiff, arms too long / short... stuff like that o - o;
And... uh... don't give something like ... "HIS HAIR SUCKS" I already know that .-. I'll fix the little details when I do the lineart.
I don't like drawing full body.. they're so hard... and ...
I'll scrap this later ^^ ;;
And... er... please don't fav this
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It's really really really really really good!!! >w<
And like some other people already said, the legs should be shorter ^^
Yeah... I already faved this... XD
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well im a beginner anime artist and i cant even dray boys so good job~!
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becuz you fail, thats why baka kitti :3
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Ah quit looking at me like that...puppy eyes won't work on me
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How about puppy eyes like this? fav.me/d6buo9u
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It's good ^^ Just a few things suggested below~ :3
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Oh okay, thanks! ^ o ^ )//
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Welcome > u < I really like it though! :3
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I would shorten the legs, make the arms longer ad also his hips… they're kinda too wide for a man 
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Hips are so hard @ ___ @; I don't even know how they're supposed to look
Ah well = 7 = );; I'll figure it out later u v u
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why don't you watch this video tutorial? [link] it should help you^^
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Oh thanks! I'll watch it now
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Maybe, his legs are too long c': and his arms need to get longer a little bit, include the body
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Oh okay, thanks for letting me know! ^^
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He seems a bit wide in the hip area. xD Men have either a rectangle or triangle shaped torso, so keep that in mind when you draw them. o: Right now he's closer to a rectangle build, so I'd just slim down his hips a bit. Also, his legs seem a bit long, so if you just shorten them a bit, then they'd be fine. The pose seems a bit stiff, but that's usually not too bad for sophisticated poses like that. >.> Overall, I'd slim down his torso and legs since they don't really fit with his arms, head, and neck size. xD
Hope that helps. c:
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I see... that sounds a little complicated... But I'll try! Thank you so much! <3
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You're welcome. xD It's nice how enthusiastic you are + q +
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With the torso: Even with his outfit, his torso looks a tad bit too big. And as for the feet, the one somewhat hidden seems to be a bit too big. After all, think about how it's further back, therefor is smaller than the one facing towards the viewer. The legs look fine, but they're a little too long. Take about half an inch (real life measurement) away from his lower legs near the ankles and it should be all good!~
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Oh thanks for all these suggestions! I'll try my best to fix things ^^
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Hmm, maybe o: I'll consider that! ^^
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yay ^^
AN I LOVE DAT HAIR! <3
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I suck at drawing poses/ getting anatomy right, but imageshack.com/scaled/large/51...
I'm not sure if it helps at all, but heck /// (give his shoulders and legs some balance)
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alkjs--- that looks so much better than what I can draw
Thank you soo much ; u ; <3
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