Comments: 23
Psycho-Assassin [2009-12-23 00:39:38 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
My first critique. People might think I'm being a bit generous with the stars but I'm not; I greatly enjoy this piece.
I admire your ability to use pens in such a way; being able to master the shading and the volume like that. I also find it amazing that you managed to give the clothes their respective textures and didn't spoil anything in the process of applying shine.
All the small details are a pleasure to my eye whenever I find them. How can something only done in two colors be so lovely?
Ah, but not all I have to say is entirely good; or this would not be a critique, would it?
First of all, I think their poses are pretty much flawless, but it seems that they're floating in space, or sitting on some sort of hill. You probably wanted this effect but really, there isn't much I can find to critique about. Don't worry, this happens to me too, and so much.
Second of all, Ms Rib Cage's face seems a bit flat somehow; maybe it's the angle, but it seems a bit odd. Maybe you'd have to stick out her bangs a bit more, seeing as her head is tilted.
And third of all, Ms Heart's visible shoe seems a little wonky. But I know how hard shoes are to draw!
All in all, I find this lovely. I hope to see much more of your work in years to come!
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kitty-witty0 In reply to Psycho-Assassin [2009-12-23 04:09:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! <3 You're right about everything, especially the part about it looking like they're on a hill :'D I absolutely could not get that right. The shoe was a dumb mistake on my part though, I shall be on the lookout for such things now! Thanks again, so much <3333
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Psycho-Assassin In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-23 04:11:25 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
Now isn't it hard to make them sit straight!?
Shoes are very difficult, but I know you can do it.
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ElectroDolly [2011-05-29 14:41:44 +0000 UTC]
So Amazing! Though I bet you always hear that >w<~
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gsdark [2010-02-21 04:21:31 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE their hairstyle!
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inuyashalover588 [2010-02-07 02:46:54 +0000 UTC]
SWEET i never saw this before YOUR SO DAMN GOOD
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kitty-witty0 In reply to Taru-neechan [2009-12-21 03:22:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ;________; Lol I'll try to keep it a secret...BUT GIIIIRL, YOU KNOW HOW I AM WITH GOSSIP.
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Cherry-ala-Mode [2009-12-21 00:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, they are awesome.
I just like how original the design is. They're like twins, except not and oh my goodness, I suck with adjectives. I love the use of red and black.
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kitty-witty0 In reply to Cherry-ala-Mode [2009-12-21 01:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! That absolutely was not a fail comment, your comments are always amazing <33
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ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:13:16 +0000 UTC]
The one on the right is the original, she gave her heart away to make that duplicate, so now she is only bone and flesh
lol, thinking is fun!
AWESOME JOB
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kitty-witty0 In reply to ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:35:49 +0000 UTC]
...Though of course it may or may not be true
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ninja2395 In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 21:06:05 +0000 UTC]
...i hit it right on the mark, didnt i?
lolno im just kidding, but i do wonder....*stares into space*
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kitty-witty0 In reply to ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:34:15 +0000 UTC]
...That's a really good interpretation ;__________;
THINKING IS FUN INDEED. Thank you 8D
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WinterDeathcore [2009-12-20 17:39:38 +0000 UTC]
can i marry this drawing?
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WinterDeathcore In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 17:47:08 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
omg we'll be together forever... untill my responsability meter drops bellow average(and my average is being so responsable taht i loose my shoolbag)and i'll loose Ms/Mr drawing D:!
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