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Description But which one is the original?

I felt like using my black and red markers. This should've been quick, but school makes such things...not quick ): Eurgh. I hope it's not too saturated. I'm usually blind to such things.

The light and shading here makes no sense, I'm aware of that...A lot of the time it's because I made a mistake with the marker (they're the "fat" kind). ): So, uh, yeah.

I used Prismacolor lining pens and Roseart markers. :> I referenced the rib cage and heart from my school health textbook lol.

(And by the way, you may have noticed that I deleted A LOT of old artwork from my gallery...though you probably didn't. Basically, if I found it painful to look at, I deleted it xD That was a lot, as you could imagine.)

Edit: In order to avoid any lawsuits related to bleeding eyes, I de-saturated this a little. Hopefully it's easier to look at now?
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Comments: 23

Psycho-Assassin [2009-12-23 00:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


My first critique. People might think I'm being a bit generous with the stars but I'm not; I greatly enjoy this piece.
I admire your ability to use pens in such a way; being able to master the shading and the volume like that. I also find it amazing that you managed to give the clothes their respective textures and didn't spoil anything in the process of applying shine.
All the small details are a pleasure to my eye whenever I find them. How can something only done in two colors be so lovely?

Ah, but not all I have to say is entirely good; or this would not be a critique, would it?
First of all, I think their poses are pretty much flawless, but it seems that they're floating in space, or sitting on some sort of hill. You probably wanted this effect but really, there isn't much I can find to critique about. Don't worry, this happens to me too, and so much.
Second of all, Ms Rib Cage's face seems a bit flat somehow; maybe it's the angle, but it seems a bit odd. Maybe you'd have to stick out her bangs a bit more, seeing as her head is tilted.
And third of all, Ms Heart's visible shoe seems a little wonky. But I know how hard shoes are to draw!
All in all, I find this lovely. I hope to see much more of your work in years to come!

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kitty-witty0 In reply to Psycho-Assassin [2009-12-23 04:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3 You're right about everything, especially the part about it looking like they're on a hill :'D I absolutely could not get that right. The shoe was a dumb mistake on my part though, I shall be on the lookout for such things now! Thanks again, so much <3333

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Psycho-Assassin In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-23 04:11:25 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!
Now isn't it hard to make them sit straight!?
Shoes are very difficult, but I know you can do it.

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ElectroDolly [2011-05-29 14:41:44 +0000 UTC]

So Amazing! Though I bet you always hear that >w<~

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gsdark [2010-02-21 04:21:31 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE their hairstyle!

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kitty-witty0 In reply to gsdark [2010-02-21 21:41:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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inuyashalover588 [2010-02-07 02:46:54 +0000 UTC]

SWEET i never saw this before YOUR SO DAMN GOOD

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WyntonRed [2010-02-01 07:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Those faces are actually very cool, in a blank creepy kinda way

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kitty-witty0 In reply to WyntonRed [2010-02-01 15:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was going for blank and creepy, so I'm glad that that's what you're seeing.

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Taru-neechan [2009-12-21 02:40:33 +0000 UTC]

holy shit, i can see you improving...

and this is so awesome, and i have somthing of a coolshoefetish; and seeing as has already married it, don't tell her that i'll be having an affair with this drawing in the near future CAUSE IT'S SO DAMN AWESOME, if that's okay with you

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kitty-witty0 In reply to Taru-neechan [2009-12-21 03:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ;________; Lol I'll try to keep it a secret...BUT GIIIIRL, YOU KNOW HOW I AM WITH GOSSIP.

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Cherry-ala-Mode [2009-12-21 00:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, they are awesome.
I just like how original the design is. They're like twins, except not and oh my goodness, I suck with adjectives. I love the use of red and black.
/fail comment

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kitty-witty0 In reply to Cherry-ala-Mode [2009-12-21 01:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That absolutely was not a fail comment, your comments are always amazing <33

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ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:13:16 +0000 UTC]

The one on the right is the original, she gave her heart away to make that duplicate, so now she is only bone and flesh

lol, thinking is fun!

AWESOME JOB

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kitty-witty0 In reply to ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:35:49 +0000 UTC]

...Though of course it may or may not be true

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ninja2395 In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 21:06:05 +0000 UTC]

...i hit it right on the mark, didnt i?

lolno im just kidding, but i do wonder....*stares into space*

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kitty-witty0 In reply to ninja2395 [2009-12-20 20:34:15 +0000 UTC]

...That's a really good interpretation ;__________;

THINKING IS FUN INDEED. Thank you 8D

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ninja2395 In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 21:03:27 +0000 UTC]

lol...reallY?

INORITE
your welcome

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WinterDeathcore [2009-12-20 17:39:38 +0000 UTC]

can i marry this drawing?

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kitty-witty0 In reply to WinterDeathcore [2009-12-20 17:41:36 +0000 UTC]

I now pronounce you drawing and wife.

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WinterDeathcore In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 17:47:08 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
omg we'll be together forever... untill my responsability meter drops bellow average(and my average is being so responsable taht i loose my shoolbag)and i'll loose Ms/Mr drawing D:!

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kitty-witty0 In reply to WinterDeathcore [2009-12-20 18:03:48 +0000 UTC]

The drawing is whatever gender you want it to be But either way, that's what marriage counseling is for! Your relationship can surviiiiiiiive! 8U

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WinterDeathcore In reply to kitty-witty0 [2009-12-20 20:23:27 +0000 UTC]

ye, like we should get drunk some time soon XD
i can actually imagine a paper dancing around

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