Sneeb [2013-11-20 23:34:17 +0000 UTC]
The legs don't seem to correspond with where the hips would be in the perspective, and the foot is missing. Amazing job at the top half of the body. Avoiding finger drawing with the arms (just joking around, but I feel it). There is a certain zig-zag midway through the hair that is a bit unnatural. Exaggerate the hair that is separated at the back with its continuation a little. The mug on the right seems to have a shadow beneath and to the right of the handle, which is a bit... I don't know. It would be difficult, but aligning the pattern of the floor's angle would be a nice addition (along with a little bit lower aperture to make the floor pattern come in just barely. The lighting on the first mug was marvelous, but another light to get rid of the reflection of the floor could be a nice addition. I hope this was helpful.
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