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Description                         Male! Jessica Rabbit x Reader – Slow Seduction (1/3)
                                                                         

                                                                            (Jessica Rabbit = Jesse Rabbit)

                   ((Reader-chan in here will not be a toon, rather she will be one of the normal people visiting the establishment~))

                          (The inspiration of this story comes from this video by a most charming YouTuber. Here’s the link                          www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cu7JVb… )

 

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The clicking of my heels echo throughout the streets I walk through. My destination, Ink and Paint Club.

I’ve heard so much about the place from other people passing by me in the streets, so I figured, why not give it a try. It may actually not be all that bad. You never know until you try.

I had dressed decently for this event, covering up my important parts, unlike other women I see that rather have it all hang out.

My outfit was an over the shoulder, knee length, (f/c) dress, with a pair of two inch (2/f/c) heels.

Not too dressy, but not so casual that it would make me stand out at the club.

I was walking down the street for some time, before the bustling of bodies rushing into this brightly lit building caught my attention. Based on the appearance, and how many people are entering, I have a high suspicion that this is the place.

Sure enough, as I draw near the establishment, I see it to the place I was searching for.

Following the line of people inside, I glance around.

The place was semidecent. I consisted of a large stage towards the front of the room, in the dead center, and then a bunch of circular tables with chairs scatter the rest of the premises.

I see an empty seat in the first row, right in front of the stage.

Taking the seat at the table, I read the sign that is beside the stage.

Tonight’s shows where mostly booked with one person. A singer named Jesse Rabbit. Based on how many shows he has to perform, he must be quite a popular chap.

The people file into their seats, and not long after, the lights dimmed.

A jazzy sort of tune starts, followed by some snapping. The people began to applaud, as a tall, muscular, and very handsome red head waltzed onto the stage.

The man wore a sparkly, sequined red jacket, with matching red pants. On his feet where classy black dress shoes, and on his hands were purple gloves. He had shoulder length red hair, that had his bangs thrown over to cover is eye on the left.

He had the most gorgeous blue orbs that studied over the crowd he was performing for. They came to rest on my sitting form, and he flashes me a wink. I flush and look to the side out of embarrassment.

All in all, this man was extremely attractive.

Opening his perfect lips, he began to sing.

“You had plenty money, 1922. You let other rich men, make a fool of you. Why don’t you do right, like some other gals do.”

He stalks to the front of the stage and kneels down so that his face is mere inches away from mine. My face darkens to almost match the color of his hair, and he smirks.

“Let’s get out of here, I got some money for you~”

Backing away, he walks back up the stage much to my disappointment.

“You're sittin' down and wonderin' what it's all about.”

He twirls back around, and proceeds to slowly and teasingly unbutton his jacket while walking down the stage. His blue orbs were trained on me, causing me to fidget some in my chair.

“You ain't got no money, they will put you out. Why don't you do right, like some other gals do?” Upon reaching me again, he climbs down the stairs on the stage, and walks around my form while dragging his hand along my shoulder.

I shiver at the contact, and continue watching him sing.

“Let’s get out of here, I got some money for you~”

Sitting down in the chair across from me, he draws my hand forward, and brings it to his lips. However, just as I thought he was going to kiss it, he pulls away teasingly, and heads to another table. His head is turned towards me as he walks away however.

“If you had prepared twenty years ago. You wouldn't be a-wanderin' now from door to door.”

He grabs a lock of some other girl’s hair, and twirls it around his finger. My jaw clenches at the sight. The singing man’s blue orbs flash as he grins at me.

“Why don't you do right, like some other gals do? Let’s get out of here, I got some money for you~”

Sliding his unbuttoned jacket off, he tosses it over his shoulder to rest there, and proceeds to make his way back towards me.

Leaning over the table, he rests his forehead against mine, causing me to jump back in shock.

“Why don’t you do it right, like some other gals do?”

Bending down, I quickly rummage through my purse until I pull out a $1 bill. Handing it to him, I turn my head to the side in embarrassment, and flush even darker.

He takes the money and smiles at me.

“Let’s get out of here, I got some money for you~”

He waltzes back up the stage, and stops just outside the curtains.

Turning his head around, but leaving his bare back to us, he sings one last verse, “Why don’t you do it right, like some other gals…..do?”

With that said, he blows a kiss to the audience, and sashays behind the purple, velvet curtains.

The audience goes wild, and I swear you could hear their whoops and claps the next country over.

My face was still a bright red tint from all the attention the club singer was giving me, and I try to make it go away. He seemed like the player sort, it wouldn’t be any sort of shocker if that’s what he did to a lot of guests. After all he was teasing the girl behind me a bit, twirling her hair and all.

Standing up, I head over to the bar to grab a glass of water while I wait for the next show.

Sitting down at a stool, I press my burning face into my hands.

The bartender rests against the counter on an elbow.

“So what will it be girlie?”

Looking up some, I smile at the man.

“One glass of water please.”

He cocks an eyebrow at my request, but turns to do it anyways. He picks up a large glass cup, and fills it to the rim with ice cold water.

“Here you go love, anything else I can give ‘ya?”

Shaking my head, I take a deep gulp of the clear liquid, before placing it back down. While I was drinking it, I let my mind wander back to the stunning singer. He was positively amazing.

I think his name was Jesse? Yeah, it was Jesse Rabbit, the one who is booked pretty much the whole night. Now I can see why.

While I was engrossed in my thoughts, I didn’t notice an approaching figure, until they call out a greeting.

“Hello darling. Enjoy the show I put on?”

Jumping, I swivel around in my stool, only to come face to face with the singer I was just thinking about.

He had his jacket back on, but it was unbuttoned.

Walking up to the stool next to mine, he sits down, and rests his head against his palm while watching me.

Looking down to cover my reforming blush, I nod slowly,

“I-It was phenomenal. I-I-I loved it.”

Grinning, he uses his hand to push his bangs back from his face. Though I wouldn’t dream about saying it outloud, it was sort of sexy when he did that.

“Well thank you darling. I’m glad you did. There’s more coming tonight if you’re interested.” He winks.

“I-I’ll defiantly be watching.”

His grin increases.

“That’s wonderful news.”

He watches me for a few more moments before he speaks up again.

“You’re awful cute ‘ya know?”

Flushing even darker, I swear I resemble a fire hydrant in color.

“T-T-Thank y-you.”

Leaning across the short space that separates the two of us, he places a light, and gentle kiss on my cheek. Pulling away, he flashes me a smirk, before standing up.

“I should get back behind stage to get ready. You take care darling, I’m looking forward to seeing you in the audience again. Buh-bye now.” He waggles his fingers in farewell, and then makes his way back to the stage.

I remain staring after the flirtatious red head in awe, my hand cupping the cheek his lips had only just recently left.

Could it be that he is interested in me? That seems highly illogical, but with the way he is acting, and just singling me out, there’s a high chance!

The bartender chuckles and shakes his head at me, while wiping down the counters.

“I wouldn’t take his actions into account love. ‘Ye see, Jesse acts like that towards all the girls, and then he turns around and smashes their hearts with his bare hands. There’s no such thing as love with him. Only catch and release. I wouldn’t waste ‘yer time on such a man girlie.”

Turning my head around to face him, I look at him in disbelief.

“That can’t be true, can it?”

He nods his head sadly, and dries his hands off with the towel.

“Sad but true love. Sorry about that.”

Looking down in both embarrassment for believing in his tricks, and despair for being fooled, I clutch my hands in my lap.

I stay like that for a few moments, before I unclench my hands and reach into my purse to pull out a $10. Tossing it onto the counter, I leap to my feet and stalk out, calling over my shoulder.

“Keep the change.”

Little did I know, as I stormed out in rage and sadness, Jesse watches me from behind the curtains, and a cloud of disappointment and sadness dart across his blue orbs.

 

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                                                                                 ((To be continued in Part 2))

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Comments: 148

DAutum1960 [2020-03-21 01:46:12 +0000 UTC]

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Shenzi24601 [2020-02-03 03:51:33 +0000 UTC]

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PizzaIsLife002 [2019-09-26 03:30:38 +0000 UTC]

part 2 please!!?❤️❤️

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Death4everone [2019-01-11 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]

MAke part two pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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tarasilvertabby [2018-08-05 03:31:10 +0000 UTC]

please make some more. i want to know what happens next.

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Sexy-Zexy [2018-03-01 17:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Where is part two?

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Runzi333 [2018-01-26 21:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey I love Love love love all of your stories but this part :"I had dressed decently for this event, covering up my important parts, unlike other women I see that rather have it all hang out." Is really taking away from your writing. It seems really rude to belittle how others dress and makes this hard to read as someone who knows how awful it is to be called a slut to their face for wearing a tank top. I really love your work and I'm not trying to say any of it is bad at all I just want you to know that your hurting people who read this when you write things like that. judging others on how they dress takes away from writing and when you do it in a reader insert it excludes people who dress differently from you and breaks the illusion of being a part of the story.

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NightfireXD In reply to Runzi333 [2018-05-16 04:02:22 +0000 UTC]

I think instead of belittling a group of people, they were referring to the women in the Ink and Paint Club who were vying for Jesse’s attention. Clearly even if you see the aforementioned line as being rude, there’s definitely a nicer way to tell them that this line hurt your feelings.
It didn’t particularly bother me because I know there are people who are confident in their bodies enough to wear showier clothing. Unlike them, I myself am uncomfortable with how I look, and therefore tend to dress more modestly. I believe they were using this line to comment on the reader’s personality rather than belittle or shame a group of people not really mentioned in the actually story.

When writing an X-Reader, it is impossible to please everyone, or have a character that can adapt to everyone completely when writing (unless you end up leaving a lot of information blank). They (in my opinion, of course) are trying to portray a more modest, naive reader (I.e. clothing, blushing/behavior around Jessie, and then the obvious sad and upset reaction to falling for his charms).
Again, this is my opinion, and I do know that everyone is entitled to their own (and that you should not put content on the internet if you don’t want to be critiqued). I just think you cracked down on the author a little hard (and then had people jump on top of it too).

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NatashaKrystal In reply to Runzi333 [2018-01-30 17:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, when I saw that line, I thought that it was quite rude as well. People should be able to wear whatever they want without being judged. If they have their cleavage and ass out, fine. I don't really care. Go for it.


I mean it's okay if this is their opinion on the matter but to write it in a reader insert? No. Like you said, it excludes the people who dress differently and not everyone would agree. With a reader insert, you must write with a lot of vagueness so that everyone can be a part of the story. Having that line just felt like the author was trying to push their beliefs and ideas onto the readers. Probably not their intention but that's how it comes off...at least to me.

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Runzi333 In reply to NatashaKrystal [2018-02-02 00:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah unintentionally excluding a large group of people based on personal preference in clothes doesn't make for great x reader moments and it just hurts extra because most people are reading this stuff to take a break from that kind of treatment in real life.

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zombieslare [2017-07-14 06:50:06 +0000 UTC]

wait, this is the pre-squeal to
"It Had To Be You",
isn't it?

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PizzaIsLife002 In reply to zombieslare [2019-12-02 03:51:24 +0000 UTC]

I don’t think so cause that was written by a different writer. 

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zombieslare In reply to PizzaIsLife002 [2019-12-04 00:12:51 +0000 UTC]

 oh, ok just checking

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BleachYaoiFangurl [2017-07-11 02:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Is it going to continue or not? I love it 

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NatashaKrystal In reply to BleachYaoiFangurl [2017-10-15 23:44:00 +0000 UTC]

The last thing the author commented on about this was a year ago. Honestly, I'm not even sure they are still active.

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BleachYaoiFangurl In reply to NatashaKrystal [2017-10-16 20:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Well shit. That's dumb anyway...She/He could say that it will not be continued but let the people waiting like dog -_- :/

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NatashaKrystal In reply to BleachYaoiFangurl [2017-10-16 21:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I know. I honestly cannot find anything that's recent on her profile since last year so I don't know if he or she's been on. Even if they added a little comment or announcement to say where they were and what they were doing with any discontinued works, I would be fine with that. But so many people have asked for this to be continued and the author said they were going to, but that's all we got to go off of and still nothing.

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SenaKay [2017-05-19 06:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Boi where part two be at

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NatashaKrystal [2017-04-23 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]

I know that you've been asked many times already but are you planning to continue this? Or has it been discontinued?

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skylar214 [2017-04-15 21:03:25 +0000 UTC]

     WHERE'S THE OTHER PARTS 

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Shenzi24601 [2017-03-23 20:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Please continue this!

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Madcastle007 [2017-01-16 03:15:30 +0000 UTC]

is there a part two?

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musickrazy123 [2017-01-16 01:40:24 +0000 UTC]

part niiiiiiiiiiiii please!

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Deathofwho01 [2017-01-15 00:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Part 2 pls

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Sbleitruss [2017-01-10 14:34:54 +0000 UTC]

I want that part 2, man. This is amazing

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GhostCodra25 [2016-12-24 01:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Part 2?

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BalanceGoddess [2016-11-27 02:48:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry if I'm annoying you, since you probably get a lot of questions about this, but will you still be doing part two?

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Ra1nBowDeath [2016-08-16 18:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Part two? :3

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to Ra1nBowDeath [2016-09-14 10:56:55 +0000 UTC]

It'll be out sooooon~ :3

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Annkeeth [2016-08-15 04:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Wait, is there part two!? I don't see it! AHHHH!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to Annkeeth [2016-09-14 10:57:14 +0000 UTC]

I haven't wrote eet yet, but I'll have it out soon! :3

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Annkeeth In reply to KittyPhantomhive14 [2016-09-15 00:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Cool! :3

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Sexy-Zexy [2016-07-26 15:53:50 +0000 UTC]

I eagerly await part two!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to Sexy-Zexy [2016-09-14 10:57:31 +0000 UTC]

I'll get it out as soon as I can! ^^

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Sexy-Zexy In reply to KittyPhantomhive14 [2016-09-14 11:38:02 +0000 UTC]

I will still wait!

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amuto1000 [2016-07-18 14:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Part two!!!!! Please!!!!!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to amuto1000 [2016-09-14 10:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Comin' right up~

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amuto1000 In reply to KittyPhantomhive14 [2016-09-14 13:24:25 +0000 UTC]

yay!!!

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Onepiecelover [2016-07-08 09:20:26 +0000 UTC]

MORE PLEASE!!!

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LilMissHotTopic [2016-06-06 17:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Update Pleeeaasse!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to LilMissHotTopic [2016-09-14 10:57:54 +0000 UTC]

I wiiiiiill. It'll be out before ya know it.

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LilMissHotTopic In reply to KittyPhantomhive14 [2016-09-21 02:59:52 +0000 UTC]

What is up with this commission thing? I'm confused...

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to LilMissHotTopic [2016-09-22 13:46:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Okies. Basically it's like a payment for a fanfiction. 
You could make a request for a story, and then pay me 100 points. 

Buuut! I still do take requests, free of charge. 

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LilMissHotTopic In reply to KittyPhantomhive14 [2016-09-22 21:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay

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Marshalleeslover9 [2016-05-29 01:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Where's part two?!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to Marshalleeslover9 [2016-09-14 10:58:08 +0000 UTC]

It'll be out momentarily. ^^

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Giraffegirl123999 [2016-03-11 04:39:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this story pretty pleas make part two I've never read anything so great!!!

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KittyPhantomhive14 In reply to Giraffegirl123999 [2016-09-14 10:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Awe, why thank chu dear.
Part two is coming~

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monkchoo24 In reply to Giraffegirl123999 [2016-05-12 00:47:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm with you on that! Please oh please when you can do the next part

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monkchoo24 [2016-03-11 01:16:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry but I got six words for you. Make. More. Of. This. Story. Please.

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