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Description ...The end. *Gets heavy things thrown at her.*

Okay, so thus far the story has been a mixture of Disney's version and the original by Andersen. But this is where the Naruto characters "take up the reins," so to speak. A few people have asked me how this is going to end. I won't tell you precisely, but I will tell you this:

I'm not a fan of walking off into the sunset, laughing together for no reason like a big ball of cheesy... cheese... but I am a fan of "happily ever after."

This story's just a little longer than the other "Narutard Theater" stories. Look forward to the last part!

On a related note, I'm totally shocked by the beautiful submissions I've recieved for the contest! I'm so excited to see who wins! Check out my journal entry to see the contestants so far!

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Comments: 75

Hawkheart29 [2012-04-16 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Her sister's should worry...and what does Gaara have to do that doesn't involve his spells?

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Hate-Eater [2012-04-04 13:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Hinata is.... WTF?

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iizDeathfreeze [2012-01-25 04:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Sakura and I are connected we both think the same think

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liliepanda [2011-07-14 01:00:07 +0000 UTC]

woo-hoo go gaara

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Litle-Noa [2011-06-08 11:48:08 +0000 UTC]

wow disney really left out the good stuff!

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TwilightNinja0001 [2011-01-21 01:59:41 +0000 UTC]

OH!!! just like the REAL story....ok, makes sence!

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ch3rryb3rry101 [2011-01-04 00:57:31 +0000 UTC]

i just love seeing gaara like that he looks so cute

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shikamarusluver4eva [2010-07-13 18:50:58 +0000 UTC]

AWWW shes going after neji XD

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graciebunsart [2010-04-18 16:43:14 +0000 UTC]

wahahahha i love gaara here^^

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librabeauty23 [2009-05-08 03:10:47 +0000 UTC]

if there's a Grimm ref here... shouldn't Sakura and Hinata be bald?

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sabbs95 [2009-01-27 12:25:21 +0000 UTC]

hey um can i ask u smthing ... pleeeeze say yes
i have all of the narutard theater stories downloaded
can i um print them out and get them binded i book form
i wont use it just show it to my friends i swear .. honest

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Desmond-the-Patient [2009-01-01 06:48:56 +0000 UTC]

She got her voice back?

She was told that the witch was going to take her voice, but didn't she tried to speak?

Or probably the witch got bored of her voice and decided to throw it away...

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Sid-Ty-4ever [2008-12-21 23:33:49 +0000 UTC]

good job I really like that you combined the Disney version with the original

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sakura2dog [2008-12-06 05:24:45 +0000 UTC]

isnt d knife thing d original little mermaid? o wait - i jst read the artist comment - never mind

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NekoChan323 In reply to sakura2dog [2009-02-26 22:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Sakura-Chaaaaaan so kawaii in the 3rd panel jajaja xD

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BaratheThornNinja [2008-05-22 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]

haha, that sounds exactly like something gaara would say. Knowing him, he probably does have better things to do. *looks at nervous people with evil smile*

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albertxlailaxx [2008-05-07 18:35:42 +0000 UTC]

no!dont tell me shell kill herself!not her or neji should die!no!

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moonlitinuyasha1985 [2008-03-21 23:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Go, TenTen! Go to Neji-san!!! Hurry! Time's running out!!!!!!!!!!!

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FiregirlKataang [2008-02-20 20:16:19 +0000 UTC]

lol Gaara got bored watching over her xD

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use-a-kat [2008-01-27 09:25:20 +0000 UTC]

The mermaid princess got her voice back, before getting the prince, simply because the sea-witch got bored...That's an original take on the ending, and it really does suit Gaara XD

Tenten looks really cute when she's crying, but the second-to-last panel captures her attitude so well ^_^

I wonder how Tenten will stop the arranged marriage...

I mean, the only thing Neji remembered about the girl who saved him from drowning was the "Breathe, dammit! Breathe!" part

I can't wait to see how this ends!!

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Toboe-LoneWolf [2008-01-26 02:33:30 +0000 UTC]

....How in the world did I not know of your Narutard Theatre? I just spent like, the last half-hour reading them all. You rock, seriously. Man, I thought I was like, the only one who saw how Disney could be modified for Naruto! (I made this megahuge Flash animation all about Neji and Tenten and Disney. Coincidentally, Little Mermaid was in it. XP)

I really like how you've decided to go with more of a "original" version influence of the Little Mermaid. So many people only know the Disney version. Though I too, like a "happily ever after." XP Eagerly awaiting the last page!

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Kivae In reply to Toboe-LoneWolf [2008-01-26 02:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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Violetrose496 [2008-01-25 01:35:21 +0000 UTC]

So awesomethat she got her voice bk So kewl!!!!!

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sweetipo88 [2008-01-24 17:25:03 +0000 UTC]

This is the best comic yet ^_^
You should make one with Hanabi in it.

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Echiss-the-Wind [2008-01-23 19:17:50 +0000 UTC]

I love Naruto Theatre. Please don't stop drawing! And thanks...

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villamar [2008-01-23 06:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey, wasn't the other girl Neji's parents chose for him gonna appear in this one?

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BrokenHighway [2008-01-22 22:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... No waltzing off into the sunset, but deffinately a happily ever after... I'm seeing the last part as one big censor bar... Lolz, joking, joking...

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jacobyel [2008-01-22 22:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Awww, poor Tenten!

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narutohinata666 [2008-01-22 22:18:58 +0000 UTC]

i know the original story please let this have a happy endding!!!

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wickedangel17 [2008-01-22 21:45:06 +0000 UTC]

just think how weird the little mermaid WOULD have been if this happened... i like how this turned out though!

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AwesomeDogLvr1010 [2008-01-22 16:22:20 +0000 UTC]

kwl hrry up and make another one!!! plz

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lordkronodos [2008-01-22 15:18:49 +0000 UTC]

Another good page to the story! Keep them coming! You're great at this, Kivae!

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Juunanagou17 [2008-01-22 13:16:37 +0000 UTC]

ahahah go tenten!!! XD

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Gaara-LostDreams [2008-01-22 09:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Gaara is as melancholic as ever I see I think he's the type of person that gets bored really easily...like me. Yay!

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red-belt [2008-01-22 08:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Owww... what is she going to do ? lol
Love the expression of Sakura and Hinata in the last panel ^^

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Smogletoff [2008-01-22 05:37:11 +0000 UTC]

I love Gaara's line.

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Dango-Daikazoku [2008-01-22 05:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha... so cute.

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Ameko-Shadowsong [2008-01-22 04:06:11 +0000 UTC]


I burst out laughing at Gaara.
That is the best line in the world.

"Because I have better things to do than manage your love life?"

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lilangel920 [2008-01-22 03:12:09 +0000 UTC]

i love it keep on going plz i want to see the end

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Marykke [2008-01-22 02:51:39 +0000 UTC]

hahah! does sakura have a sunburn on her shoulder? looks that way, and even if it wasn't intentional i love it

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Inferno9 [2008-01-22 02:41:53 +0000 UTC]

w00tw00t, very nice, can't wait for teh ending! Love the expressions of Hinata and Sakura at the end xD

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HatakeKakashiLover [2008-01-22 02:28:16 +0000 UTC]

hilarious as usual! Can't wait to see the end!

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Amaya-Zorifuki [2008-01-22 01:28:53 +0000 UTC]

/silently woots/ I like how though it follows the original story, a happy ending is still intended. That's something we all like to see. I think I'm liking this vertion of the story best of all.

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fmorgana [2008-01-22 01:25:30 +0000 UTC]

you are awesome, I love this story a lot. Your drawings are really cute and I love the way you manage to get everyone involved...Gaara is HILARIOUS

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Kivae In reply to fmorgana [2008-01-22 01:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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fmorgana In reply to Kivae [2008-01-22 16:23:51 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Quel-chan [2008-01-22 01:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Yay! GO TENTEN!

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Hana-Maehata [2008-01-22 00:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Go Tenten~! Nevermind I'm not a fan, I'm roped in! So far I've seen both versions of the story perfectly blended~!

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Foxy-Sierra [2008-01-22 00:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

Excellent comic

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SailorPluto-the-Pyro [2008-01-22 00:29:45 +0000 UTC]

This is getting good

Correct me if I'm mistaken, but in the original didn't the sisters cut their hair off and give it to the witch in order to obtain the knife, and the knowledge that could save the mermaid? I'm just bringing it up cause I'm a geek...and a sucker for the old fairytales...

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