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kiwiootori β€” She Cared
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Published: 2014-10-29 00:15:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1309; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description She said she didn't care
And that she didn't love him,
But when he called her up
Crying, she caved,
And he took another
Piece of her heart away
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Comments: 11

ClassyNerd16 [2016-01-23 00:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful and sad.Β Β 

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kiwiootori In reply to ClassyNerd16 [2016-02-13 05:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!Β Β 

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ClassyNerd16 In reply to kiwiootori [2016-02-18 07:33:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!Β Β 

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kittenroseabby [2014-11-01 00:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. If this is based on you, I wish you the best of luck. Keep your head up. It WILL get better. I promise.Β Β 

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kiwiootori In reply to kittenroseabby [2014-11-02 19:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!Β Β 

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Diamonds-Dont-Shine [2014-10-29 10:29:02 +0000 UTC]

you indeed have got 'he' instead of 'she' in that line, which was a bit confusing at first haha.
I like it. It's pure, simple, and to the point.

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kiwiootori In reply to Diamonds-Dont-Shine [2014-10-29 22:47:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

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HopeSwings777 [2014-10-29 07:07:59 +0000 UTC]

You've got "he" instead of "she" in line 2.

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kiwiootori In reply to HopeSwings777 [2014-10-29 22:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay, I'll fix that. Thank you!

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13Leagues [2014-10-29 02:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Β The pure truth in this! Bravo!Β 

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kiwiootori In reply to 13Leagues [2014-10-29 22:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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