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klark-kent — Kill Me Again

Published: 2004-02-23 14:17:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description Once again an on the spot poem. I feel like shit due to the cold that has been bugging me for the last week (and counting).

I am going to attempt to make this rhyme so it may sound forced but i hope not. I guess we shall have to see.
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Comments: 11

WaterBug [2004-03-14 07:14:31 +0000 UTC]

I like it
You've got some great imagery here
I also like the picture you've submitted w/ this poem, it really goes well with it, it's simple but simple is sometimes a good thing
Good work here

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klark-kent In reply to WaterBug [2004-03-14 12:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou . .

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WaterBug In reply to klark-kent [2004-03-14 18:35:44 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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oOEleMenTOo [2004-02-23 14:48:19 +0000 UTC]

coolios kinda like Funeral for a friend lryics lol....broken hearts

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klark-kent In reply to oOEleMenTOo [2004-02-23 15:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol, they are kinda yeah . Thankyou for the comment .

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limpsharp [2004-02-23 14:35:21 +0000 UTC]

wow, i love you use of imagery, and for a poem that was created on the spot, this is really rather good.

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klark-kent In reply to limpsharp [2004-02-23 15:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thankyou . .

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klark-kent [2004-02-23 14:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Side Note

This sounds a little forced but i like it, and the start was inspired by "The Crow", sounds a little like Edgar Allen Poe, but still. Comments duely welcomed, bith good and bad .

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leaff [2004-02-23 14:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Great poem.

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klark-kent In reply to leaff [2004-02-23 14:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks .

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leaff In reply to klark-kent [2004-02-23 14:24:00 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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